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post Aug 30 2009, 06:09 PM
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Moonlight Tears

"I will die among savage beasts
A foe to the world of men
Dead at birth. Born to be dead
Every night I dream of the moon's tears
Its disciple born from the ray of others
I obtained knowledge far beyond my kind
I've endured the pain of every fallen star"

The night whispered to me (the dawn awoke)
Sang my poems and took away
Still the moon dies, without the bright of others
A dark element amidst lightful creatures

The sun is alive, during the darkest day
The brightest night. Among all the lust
The lost of all the purity (in my kind).

The skies are over an epic tale
Where man is monster and monster is man
Beast is good and Prince is bad
The kiss of day is the death of the night

Leave me alone or send me the dark
Enlighten the ways where my Soulmate lies
Enough of risks, enough of fights
The magic exists but it doesn't apply

Condemn me to be a star for the rest of time
Grant me the wish to shine like
All the others in my way
Let me hold them and say
"I'm the one who should shine


My fall was caused by the Sun
My hate was born by the Sun
My tears are the same as the Moon
So I'll never shine by myself"

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FILIPE ROCHA 2009





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post Aug 30 2009, 08:06 PM
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Nice lyrics man. Are you going to write some music as well?


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post Aug 31 2009, 12:44 PM
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QUOTE (Emir Hot @ Aug 30 2009, 08:06 PM) *
Nice lyrics man. Are you going to write some music as well?


I always write music for my lyrics but never finished a music 100% unfortunately sad.gif

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post Aug 31 2009, 08:32 PM
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Lyrics are awesome! I like the picture also!


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post Sep 1 2009, 02:40 AM
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QUOTE (Vasilije Vukmirovic @ Aug 31 2009, 08:32 PM) *
Lyrics are awesome! I like the picture also!



Picture is not mine I'm afraid smile.gif But thanks for the kind words...

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QUOTE (Rated Htr @ Aug 31 2009, 12:44 PM) *
I always write music for my lyrics but never finished a music 100% unfortunately sad.gif

You should man, that's how the whole thing starts. In the end you might finish with an album smile.gif


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QUOTE (Emir Hot @ Sep 1 2009, 02:54 AM) *
You should man, that's how the whole thing starts. In the end you might finish with an album smile.gif



I have compositions of my own, GPs with guitar, drums, bass, piano, everything done by me...I just never seem to get an entire idea complete, not because I can't blend or make up, it's just that when wanting to record, there's always something wrong, either programs don't work, either I can't use them, bla bla bla... =/


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QUOTE (Rated Htr @ Sep 1 2009, 02:59 AM) *
I have compositions of my own, GPs with guitar, drums, bass, piano, everything done by me...I just never seem to get an entire idea complete, not because I can't blend or make up, it's just that when wanting to record, there's always something wrong, either programs don't work, either I can't use them, bla bla bla... =/

It will all come to the point when you'll be laughing smile.gif We all had those periods.


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post Sep 1 2009, 03:46 AM
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Yeah, I know, I hope so smile.gif


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