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Jollygreengiant1
post Sep 13 2009, 09:00 PM
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My bands demo, nothing has been editied yet and a solo is going to be added in the godzilla style part anything you think could be improved?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v0eDAJLyI1M

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My bands demo, nothing has been editied yet and a solo is going to be added in the godzilla style part anything you think could be improved?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v0eDAJLyI1M

oh and i know about the typo in the name, oops!
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post Sep 13 2009, 09:05 PM
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I like the song man, you guy's are a band i shall be keeping an eye out for smile.gif

Reminds me of a godsmack song.

do me a favour and introduce your singer to shinedown, I think he could learn alot from studying Brent Smith (Singer tongue.gif)


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post Sep 13 2009, 09:09 PM
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QUOTE (muntahunta @ Sep 13 2009, 09:05 PM) *
I like the song man, you guy's are a band i shall be keeping an eye out for smile.gif

Reminds me of a godsmack song.

do me a favour and introduce your singer to shinedown, I think he could learn alot from studying Brent Smith (Singer tongue.gif)


thanks, ive just been listening to some shinedown songs now, i think out singer will like them alot
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post Sep 13 2009, 09:11 PM
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I have nothing to suggest apart from some better production. Vocal is too much in front of everything and guitars can be sharper in the mix. I really like the drums. You said that it hasn't been edited so I hope this will all be fixed smile.gif The song is really cool.


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post Sep 13 2009, 09:12 PM
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QUOTE (Emir Hot @ Sep 13 2009, 09:11 PM) *
I have nothing to suggest apart from some better production. Vocal is too much in front of everything and guitars can be sharper in the mix. I really like the drums. You said that it hasn't been edited so I hope this will all be fixed smile.gif The song is really cool.

thanks alot emir! ill keep that in mind when we are editing it in a few weeks
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post Sep 14 2009, 10:38 PM
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I really like the song, it rocks man. The mix however needs a lot work, it's bassy, flumsy, and two dimensional. If you need some mixing tips, I'll be glad to help.

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