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Phil666
post Oct 21 2009, 03:25 PM
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Hi,

I submitted this on the "rec forum", but my message disappeared, and I'm more interested in helpful comments rather than grades anyway.

It took me a long time to record this. I chose this lesson to improve my rhythm that sucks. But I realize that there are many other problems... Anyway, any comment and suggestion to improve my playing welcomed!



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post Oct 21 2009, 03:40 PM
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I think the timing is very good, so cheers on that.

Not a bad take, but sometimes I could hear a note that didn't seem to fit in the rhythm and structure of the lesson. So to speak, your muting could be improved. Also, your fingers don't all move at the same time when performing some of the slides, so watch that. That would be about it for my constructive criticism, tone was good, and timing was good, as said before.

Overall, great take !


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post Oct 21 2009, 03:47 PM
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QUOTE (Phil666 @ Oct 21 2009, 10:25 AM) *
Hi,

I submitted this on the "rec forum", but my message disappeared,

Phil


Hey Phil, your take is currently being graded and will be moved back to the REC board soon! smile.gif


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post Oct 21 2009, 03:53 PM
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QUOTE (skennington @ Oct 21 2009, 04:47 PM) *
Hey Phil, your take is currently being graded and will be moved back to the REC board soon! smile.gif


Ok, thanks! I was confused with the new rules.

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post Oct 21 2009, 04:12 PM
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QUOTE (Phil666 @ Oct 21 2009, 10:53 AM) *
Ok, thanks! I was confused with the new rules.


Here you go man..

https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_fo...showtopic=31372


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post Oct 21 2009, 04:14 PM
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QUOTE (djohnneay @ Oct 21 2009, 04:40 PM) *
I think the timing is very good, so cheers on that.

Not a bad take, but sometimes I could hear a note that didn't seem to fit in the rhythm and structure of the lesson. So to speak, your muting could be improved. Also, your fingers don't all move at the same time when performing some of the slides, so watch that. That would be about it for my constructive criticism, tone was good, and timing was good, as said before.

Overall, great take !



Thanks. I'm glad that I improved a little my rhythm over time. It's not great but not plain wrong as it used to be. Now I'd like to improve my right hand dynamics: it looks i play like an old grandfather... sad.gif
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