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TheProof
post Mar 15 2007, 02:24 AM
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been working on it for a while. curious to see what people think. give me some tips/advice.


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post Mar 29 2007, 12:36 AM
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-.- does no one on this site have a taste for classical music?! come on! someone give me some feedback it's been like 3 weeks 0 responce@


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post Mar 29 2007, 03:38 AM
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QUOTE (TheProof @ Mar 28 2007, 07:36 PM) *
-.- does no one on this site have a taste for classical music?! come on! someone give me some feedback it's been like 3 weeks 0 responce@

THat song is really soothing as for tips i'm new to this site so sorry..... it's a really good song though i like it...
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post Mar 29 2007, 07:04 PM
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Beautiful tune. Sounds like your moving through some modes on there. I like it alot. If you're looking for different things to try out on it, I would say to minimize the pentatonics and the bends (I know they're minimal already)...they sort of distract from the classical/spanish feel that the song has and make an abrupt change to a blues feel...only other thing I'd say is to experiment with the immediate pre/post chord phrasing in the beginning/body of the song (the phrase/chord/phrase/chord sections) to make a smoother transition between phrases...could help to make it sound more like one long cohesive melody and less like an assemblage of fragments.

Those are just ideas that I'd play around with if I wrote something that cool, which I didn't. laugh.gif Song is gorgeous just the way it is though, well done! Makes me want to get my hands on some nylon strings.
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post Mar 29 2007, 10:22 PM
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thanks a ton!!! i'm definetly going to try all of those ideas out i really really appreshiate your suggestions and thank you both listening and enjoying my song! more to some soon hopefuly i'm currently working on another classical song i call "face of disgust" so keep your eyes peeled but dont expect it for too long because unless i get some crazy inspiration i seem to be stuck at the moment sad.gif


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QUOTE (TheProof @ Mar 29 2007, 04:22 PM) *
thanks a ton!!! i'm definetly going to try all of those ideas out i really really appreshiate your suggestions and thank you both listening and enjoying my song! more to some soon hopefuly i'm currently working on another classical song i call "face of disgust" so keep your eyes peeled but dont expect it for too long because unless i get some crazy inspiration i seem to be stuck at the moment sad.gif


Cool, I look forward to it! Make sure to post and let us know when it's ready!

Oh - and if you need inspiration, I recommend finding a good jazz station on the radio and parking on it. Always helps kickstart my brain when I'm in a rut!
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post Apr 1 2007, 04:53 PM
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thanks i'll be sure to try that out:)


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