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Trond Vold
post Nov 11 2009, 01:28 AM
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Hi guys smile.gif
I'm in desperate need for some help on this song i'm working on smile.gif

Been trying to figure out a suitable verse/chorus all weekend, but with no luck.

So far i've got the first minute done. The verse (or anything similar) starts where the hihat plays alone. I've made the empty space short for this sample though.

After the verse there's an idea for a followup section leading up to thee chorus. But, i'm stuck on the chorus too smile.gif

If anyone got any ideas, please share! Or record it smile.gif

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post Nov 11 2009, 11:16 PM
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Very cool ideas Trond!

I realize that what I am going to say now will be pure to blasphemy for a true metalhead - but personally I would love to hear this kind of intro riff with a steady and standard 4/4 beat (without the "rolling" kick drum). I think there is a good groove potential in the riff - and if you could somehow make it more dance-metal (again sorry for blasphemy) I would personally be completely sold! cool.gif



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post Nov 13 2009, 02:06 AM
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QUOTE (Kristofer Dahl @ Nov 11 2009, 11:16 PM) *
Very cool ideas Trond!

I realize that what I am going to say now will be pure to blasphemy for a true metalhead - but personally I would love to hear this kind of intro riff with a steady and standard 4/4 beat (without the "rolling" kick drum). I think there is a good groove potential in the riff - and if you could somehow make it more dance-metal (again sorry for blasphemy) I would personally be completely sold! cool.gif


Thats actually a really good idea!
It's the whole beat of the song that hinders me from progressing on it.

I think i have a plan now biggrin.gif Thanks!

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post Nov 29 2009, 03:37 AM
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I love the idea! I actually like the bassdrum going with the guitar on unisons.

I guess it's going to be a vocalized song. Try working on the vocal melodies before moving along.


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