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Marc_Maiden
post Nov 23 2009, 11:16 PM
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i had a bunch of random ideas a licks in guitar pro that were not getting any love...so i decided to put them in the same key and put them together:


and i made this neat little demo of what they sound like out of guitar pro:

i called it PPP for no reason lol

oh yeah ignore that ending...i do not know what i was thinking hahaha if you have any suggestions to make it sound more like a song let me know!

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post Nov 23 2009, 11:37 PM
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QUOTE (Marc_Maiden @ Nov 23 2009, 11:16 PM) *
oh yeah ignore that ending...i do not know what i was thinking hahaha if you have any suggestions to make it sound more like a song let me know!


Nah, it already sounds like a song to me !!!! Just missing the bass and maybe some key's... Otherwise it sounds good man !!! smile.gif Then of course the different parts can be arranged in a logical way throughout the whole song, but that is hard to tell without keys and bass.....

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post Nov 24 2009, 12:00 AM
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Sounds great, just missing some cool vocals, and I think the guitar lines can be a bit simplified with some pauses as well.


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post Nov 24 2009, 04:40 PM
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Some DT influence in there, just round it up a little, repeat some parts and define the form: verse chorus verse, etc


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post Nov 24 2009, 04:54 PM
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QUOTE (Daniel Realpe @ Nov 24 2009, 03:40 PM) *
Some DT influence in there, just round it up a little, repeat some parts and define the form: verse chorus verse, etc

Yes, just make some memorable structure and you'll be ok. The song definitely has a potential smile.gif


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