Hmm Help Me Out With This Song |
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Hmm Help Me Out With This Song |
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Nov 23 2009, 11:37 PM |
oh yeah ignore that ending...i do not know what i was thinking hahaha if you have any suggestions to make it sound more like a song let me know! Nah, it already sounds like a song to me !!!! Just missing the bass and maybe some key's... Otherwise it sounds good man !!! Then of course the different parts can be arranged in a logical way throughout the whole song, but that is hard to tell without keys and bass..... //Staffay -------------------- Guitars: Ibanez AM-200, Ibanez GB-10, Fender Stratocaster Classic Player, Warmouth Custom Built, Suhr Classic Strat, Gibson Les Paul Standard 2003, Ibanez steel-string Amps: Fender Hot Rod Deluxe, Marshall JMP 2103, AER 60 Effects: BOSS DD-20, Danelectro Trans. Overdrive, TC-Electronics G-Major, Dunlop Wah-wah, Original SansAmp, BOSS DD-2 Music by Staffy can be found at: Staffay at MySpace |
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Nov 24 2009, 12:00 AM |
Sounds great, just missing some cool vocals, and I think the guitar lines can be a bit simplified with some pauses as well.
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Nov 24 2009, 04:40 PM |
Some DT influence in there, just round it up a little, repeat some parts and define the form: verse chorus verse, etc
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Nov 24 2009, 04:54 PM |
Some DT influence in there, just round it up a little, repeat some parts and define the form: verse chorus verse, etc Yes, just make some memorable structure and you'll be ok. The song definitely has a potential -------------------- Check out my <a href="https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/instructor/Emir-Hot" target="_blank">Instructor profile</a>
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