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Jakub Luptovec
post Dec 21 2009, 06:32 PM
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Youtube got it slightly out of sync, so pardon that smile.gif Its basically just intro-verse-chorus-presolo-solo...

I would love to hear criticism - both negative and positive smile.gif


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post Dec 21 2009, 06:54 PM
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Well, there is some very good riffs here, but Im kinda missing the vocals or a strong melody. The sound, in my ears, is a little bit overproduced, eg. I think its too much reverb or something. But thats a matter of taste... Anyway, cool riffs and good playing!

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post Dec 21 2009, 07:10 PM
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Thanks, yea there will be singing, but I am afraid to do the vocal parts biggrin.gif (I sang in chorus etc... but I never did this sort of stuff...)


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post Dec 22 2009, 12:14 AM
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cool riffs! I want to hear the bridge though


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post Dec 22 2009, 12:23 AM
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QUOTE (Jakub Luptovec @ Dec 21 2009, 07:10 PM) *
Thanks, yea there will be singing, but I am afraid to do the vocal parts biggrin.gif (I sang in chorus etc... but I never did this sort of stuff...)


Have a go for it man, You can never be anything than better and learn something from it!!!! smile.gif

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post Dec 22 2009, 07:28 AM
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Very powerful man. I like it


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post Dec 23 2009, 02:31 PM
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Love it man! Just the type of stuff I'm into...Super harmonizations but I feel the same as Staffy, there's something missing for the ultimate power smile.gif


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post Dec 23 2009, 03:25 PM
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Song sounds very good! Production could be cleaner, there is too much space (reverb/delay) so its a little hard to distinguish all the sounds. Would love to hear vocals on this one as its an interesting composition! smile.gif


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post Dec 26 2009, 06:53 PM
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Great job mate, I love the panned riffs smile.gif


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