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post Jan 18 2010, 05:05 PM
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Just a piece ive been working on, guess you could say some prog metal influences like opeth, between the buried and me etc and some jazz fusion

maybe a little more work on the leads in some places, other than that i like the way it sounds

and one more thing, the first riff i've put in as 6/8 but should it be in 4/4 or 12/8? I put it in 6/8 as it was in 4/4 originally but everything was in triplets so 6/8 makes it compound time and all 16th notes (i thought this was the only reason to put things in 4/4) but someone told me this riff is definatley 4/4 or 12/8 so I dont really know.

would appreciate some feedback - if you enjoyed anything, and some improvements! thanks guys
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post Jan 18 2010, 05:48 PM
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Well, it is really hard to say anything here, since the sounds in GP sounds ape to me.... but there are some interesting rhytms going on, and it might sound good if played properly.... It really is like reading a lead sheet for a symphony orchestra without hearing it if You know what I mean. But obviously You put some hard effort into this, and I would love to hear a "real" demo of this song! smile.gif

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post Jan 18 2010, 05:56 PM
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QUOTE (Staffy @ Jan 18 2010, 04:48 PM) *
Well, it is really hard to say anything here, since the sounds in GP sounds ape to me.... but there are some interesting rhytms going on, and it might sound good if played properly.... It really is like reading a lead sheet for a symphony orchestra without hearing it if You know what I mean. But obviously You put some hard effort into this, and I would love to hear a "real" demo of this song! smile.gif

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Yeah I know what you mean, GP does sound a bit silly! I dont really have any tools for recording, and i'm going travelling for a few months, but when I get back i'm gonna get some sort of audio interface like a pod or a decent sound card and an amp modeler so I can record it good when I come back! cheers
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post Jan 18 2010, 05:58 PM
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QUOTE (bleak @ Jan 18 2010, 05:56 PM) *
Yeah I know what you mean, GP does sound a bit silly! I dont really have any tools for recording, and i'm going travelling for a few months, but when I get back i'm gonna get some sort of audio interface like a pod or a decent sound card and an amp modeler so I can record it good when I come back! cheers


Aha, I see, but looking forward to hear it then! Have a nice trip! smile.gif


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post Jan 18 2010, 07:11 PM
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QUOTE (Staffy @ Jan 18 2010, 04:58 PM) *
Aha, I see, but looking forward to hear it then! Have a nice trip! smile.gif


What about that time signature query I asked in the first post Staffay? I know you know your theory!
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Sounds good to me. When can we hear the audio version?


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QUOTE (Ivan Milenkovic @ Jan 20 2010, 02:17 PM) *
Sounds good to me. When can we hear the audio version?


Unfortunatley your going to have to wait a while! Going away for around 3 months so sometime after that. Will be a nice little project though, to get me into home recording/producing.. im sure I will learn alot. cheers ivan
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