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post Jan 21 2010, 08:39 PM
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After playing through the game Dragon Age: Origins 3-4 times, I was in a real dark fantasy mood and wrote this song. Its about the last dragon, and the warrior who goes and seeks him out to discover the truth about him.

Hope you enjoy it, a lot of hard work was put into this! smile.gif



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Dragon
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I met the dragon
Down by the river
Fearsome and wise
Serene and calm
His eyes too deep
To see their intent
Sorrow and knowledge
Loss and depravity

The dragon spoke
And the earth did quake
Echo of time
On the mountainsides
Infinite patience
Unending histories
Tremble in awe
At the dragon's words

Some call him a beast
Some call him a horror
Known as a devil
But few know the truth
A race once wise and mighty
True gods of the earth
Now all but one remains
With time at his side

"I am dragon
The last of my kind
Inherited memories
Haunt my tired mind
For too long I've known
Solitude and hate
I seek my rest at the end
Of a true warrior's blade"

"Give my heart
The tip of thy sword
An honorable death
Met in battle
But beware to thee
Who slay this dragon
For with my death
Comes my curse of
Eternity"

I sink my blade
Deep into his chest
Blood rushes out
A river of red
Thy heart is pierced
And thy curse is mine
Eternal life inside
A dragon's mind

I met the dragon
Down by the river
Fearsome and wise
Serene and calm
Our eyes too deep
To see the intent
Sorrow and knowledge
Blood-bound eternity



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post Jan 22 2010, 05:00 PM
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Been listening to it a while now, and I like the mix of hard riffing/softer parts. Has an epic feel to it, and an epic length too!! (too long maybe?)

Funny you should make a song based on dragon age, I've been playing that game lately, though I took a break ever since I started playing Call of duty MW2.



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post Jan 22 2010, 11:16 PM
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I don't think 13:00 is that long. I had no intention of it ever reaching that length, But when I finished writing, it was that long. So I don't think I forced it or anything, everything came really natural to me. cool.gif

Anyway, thanks for the comment! smile.gif
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post Jan 22 2010, 11:22 PM
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I like it man .. The amount of hard work that went into this track is evident. Keep up the good work !!.. and teach me how to growl like that smile.gif


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post Jan 23 2010, 04:36 PM
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Sounds great, awesome work man! smile.gif


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post Jan 26 2010, 07:17 PM
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amazing work man! thanks for sharing, lots of work!


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post Jan 27 2010, 03:08 PM
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very nice man!!! thanks for sharing! I liked so much the change from 07.00 to the end. really good man.


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post Jan 29 2010, 08:19 PM
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Thanks again guys for all the feedback!
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