Silent Noise Competition, Mine entry :) |
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Silent Noise Competition, Mine entry :) |
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Feb 4 2010, 12:53 AM |
I think the take is quite good and well balanced. I like the overal melodic built up in the whole composition. If I may suggest to work a bit on the drums, they seem a bit weak for this type of track. Just a thought.
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Feb 4 2010, 08:09 PM |
I think you did fine, the conditions given !!! (I checked the rules)
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Feb 5 2010, 02:04 AM |
Ah if the drums are provided like that than it's all good IMO
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Feb 7 2010, 06:42 PM |
I think your take is good,
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