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> The Tasty Etude 2, my take lesson by Jonathan Burgos
The Tasty Etude 2
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post Mar 3 2010, 09:39 PM
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Here is the original lesson

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Marcus Siepen
post Mar 6 2010, 06:18 PM
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Hmmm, I can't vote for that lesson yet, but I can already tell you that I like your take aside from one problem: your timing. Really pay attention to how you are playing, in this take you are behind the beat half of the time, make sure to practice with a click, this should help to get rid of that problem.


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Gerardo Siere
post Mar 8 2010, 03:41 PM
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I think Marcus is right, the timing is kinda bad, you are starting to play behind the beat most of the time.
The other thing to be fixed would be the articulation between each note, so the lines can sound as if you were actually singing them. Try to get a single lick and record your self singing it and try to mimic that with the guitar later.


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post Mar 8 2010, 04:25 PM
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I agree with Marcus a second time. You've done good work here too, I'd say even better than your other work with that of "Steve Lukather style". I really liked the sound and the guitar, my friend! I recommend you work the vibrato with this lesson, would be an interesting job, look for the vibrato. You must do it more slowly. wink.gif


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skennington
post Mar 11 2010, 09:13 PM
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**Poll Now Open** Sorry guys, missed this one.. rolleyes.gif


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post Mar 12 2010, 05:04 AM
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Nothing more to add here. I agree with comments. Still very good take


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post Mar 16 2010, 12:07 AM
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bump..


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Marcus Siepen
post Mar 21 2010, 01:01 PM
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Ok, just voted


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post Mar 22 2010, 06:22 PM
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As everybody said, timing is the biggest issue here. Notes just don't fall on the beat, they are mostly off, and mostly behind it.


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post Mar 22 2010, 06:49 PM
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Just squeaked this take by man, 7.6 (pass)


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