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post Mar 11 2010, 10:21 PM
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Hi there!
Heres other song we are working on...do you think the first part (0:00 - 0:30) fits well with the next (0:30 - 0:54)?

Hope you like it!


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post Mar 11 2010, 10:45 PM
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The transition sounds a bit strange to me :S but the rest sounds nice smile.gif

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post Mar 11 2010, 11:58 PM
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Nice playing, nice riffs, but that part where the guitars drop down sounds odd. Is that where a vocalist cuts in? If so, it might sound a lot different once they're added. But overall, pretty good. Try adding a bar of silence between the two parts, or a bar of soft closed hi-hat tings?


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post Mar 12 2010, 04:55 AM
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Not bad at all. I think guitars are quite loud in the first part. What happened and they dissapeared? I get that it's not mixed yet but still that bit was a bit shocking smile.gif nice tune anyway


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post Mar 12 2010, 05:08 AM
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At the 30 second mark it changes quickly, a bit too much? But sounds awesome afterwards. I like it, but like the others said the drop in the guitar volume is a bit too much afterwards. After the 2 minutes mark, the voicing in the back doesn't sound as good as it did previously. I don't quite know the problem, but doesn't have the ompf I think you are trying to go for? All the best, sounds awesome so far!

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post Mar 18 2010, 03:30 PM
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the guitar sound is pretty cool! I don't mind the change, I think fits


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post Mar 18 2010, 04:21 PM
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Guitar sounds great! Generally, I think there are some production issues, but the music is good!


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post Mar 19 2010, 12:37 AM
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Thanks for your comments!
Yes, the mix isnt finished... we recorded our ideas for this song and that is what we got...hehe
I dont like the slow part when the vocals starts.... eeh...delete! hehe laugh.gif


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