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post Apr 6 2007, 10:57 AM
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Hey I just recorded this because I felt like jammin on some blues. I think it turned out alright. Definitely could use some work but here you go. Tell me what you think.
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post Apr 6 2007, 01:54 PM
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awesome! nice tone btw!

I recognized some licks. it sounded pretty nice and fun.

for the construcitve critism:
try creating a climax sometimes or near the end.

good job


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post Apr 6 2007, 03:46 PM
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Awesome.


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post Apr 6 2007, 11:59 PM
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Thanks guys! Anyone else?
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post Apr 7 2007, 12:25 AM
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Really cool. Used a lot of different ideas in there, didn't just move up and down the box....lots of double stops, bends, scattered arpeggios, good job keeping it interesting. I also like how you used different transitions through the changes and through rounds, instead of just relying on the same couple of phrases like a lot of blues guys seem to. Good stuff, man!
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post Apr 7 2007, 01:18 AM
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Hey thanks wheeler I'm glad you noticed that. I've been trying to get better at outlining the chords by using arpeggios and things rather than just the straight blues scale throughout the whole thing. Man its hard to keep a blues solo interesting for 4 minutes tongue.gif .
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