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post Jun 9 2010, 01:19 AM
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Hey guys. This is the first song of the album I'm working on for my friend who has cancer.

Its just a rough outline of the song, not professionally done or anything.

Im on vocals, and my friend Ben is on guitar.









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post Jun 9 2010, 11:58 AM
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Quite enjoyable, relaxing. I would say it's good as composition, maybe little crafting here and there.
Make arrangement, record it on PC with mics and everything, make a song of it.


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post Jun 9 2010, 03:26 PM
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Sounds good. I do get a feeling that maybye it's a bit repetative, but it is enjoyable to listen to as Vasi sais. I like it smile.gif
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post Jun 9 2010, 03:29 PM
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I like the timbre of your voice!

I can see this becoming a great mainstream radio hit!


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post Jun 9 2010, 03:32 PM
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I can see this becoming a great mainstream radio hit!


Yep! biggrin.gif
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post Jun 10 2010, 02:35 AM
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Thanks everyone for this nice comments smile.gif

I am going to work on my song structure for the songs to come biggrin.gif


And I will have a produced version of this up sometime in the near future smile.gif

More to come smile.gif


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post Jun 10 2010, 08:33 PM
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I like the song and structure. Once drums and bass kick in it will be great. Looking forward to the new full produced version.


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post Jun 10 2010, 10:21 PM
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hey man i like it.
its relaxing to listen to it and like your voice!
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post Jun 10 2010, 10:55 PM
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QUOTE (sonny_NL @ Jun 10 2010, 02:21 PM) *
hey man i like it.
its relaxing to listen to it and like your voice!



Thanks Sonny. I accidentally deleted your comment on my YT page. And I now know who you are biggrin.gif My bad !


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