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> Drop B Song, A new song I made after listening to Crowbar. :)
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post Sep 15 2010, 12:00 AM
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Hey,

Been ages since I uploaded anything now... so I decided to put this up.
Been playing guitar about 3 years now ... learning still here at GMC!
Anyway ... feel free to comment ... Rock on people!

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Bass: Same and a Cort 4-string
Vocals: I sing into a Röde NT1-A (well shout)

Attached File  Jonas___You_tell_me.mp3 ( 7.91MB ) Number of downloads: 366


now you say you don't want it
no more
when you see your own reflection
behold

now you say you dont want it
your life
you tell me you got suicide on your mind

you tell me what you want
what you want
you tell me what you want
Oh God ... Uh!

you will not recognize yourself
when you see your own
reflection in hell

now you hang crucified alone
you all damned to hell
both flesh and bone

you tell me what you want
what you want
you tell me what you want

you tell me what I wanna know
I don't believe you
you tell me what I wanna know
I don't believe you


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post Sep 15 2010, 12:29 AM
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Sounds good to me. I think the vocals could come forward more. I was really surprised by the voice. After listening to the singing for a bit I kept wanting the music to sound more soul/bluesy, like "The Commitments" or like Staffay does. smile.gif


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post Sep 15 2010, 12:16 PM
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I really like the voice, how it sounds, it's really good.


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post Sep 15 2010, 01:52 PM
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Awesome Crowbar/Down style Stoner Riffing!
Vocals could be deeper for my taste but that's up to preferance...


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post Sep 15 2010, 02:09 PM
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Wow thanks guys! Yeah, the vocals I'm gonna totally redo that shit today! Probably deeper n harder.

Hey, here's another track in the same style.. on this track my good friend Fredrik plays the guitar
and I try to scream something and I actually tried to mimic Crowbar singer mixed with my own style of course.
Tried to keep vocals more deeper in the verses for you!
But I am very happy to hear "Awesome Crowbar/Down style Stoner Riffing! " because I am not a singer
but more "I want to be a really good guitarist soon"! Thanks all of you feedbacking!

Attached File  Noname___Falling_down_v3.mp3 ( 7.51MB ) Number of downloads: 182


I won't back down
you get out of here
you face the ground
when you feel the fear

Can I talk to you
or are you deaf?
You fucking wh***
hate you to death

you keep falling down
I'm gonna stay alive
you keep falling down
but I'm gonna stay alive you know

you can dig your grave
I don't need you
No more I be your slave
Tell Satan when he meets you

Now you crawl below
with demons beneath you
You fucking wh***
hate you to death

you know I told you long ago
I will never accept what you do to me
I will never I will never
I will never I will never
Accept what you do to me

you keep falling down
I'm gonna stay alive
you keep falling down
but I'm gonna stay alive you know


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post Sep 15 2010, 05:51 PM
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Its been a long time since I heard you last song uploads! I liked both songs very much, though vocals could be stronger/louder on both track (in the mix). Keep up the good work man! smile.gif


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post Sep 16 2010, 03:16 AM
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oh, I love the initial riffing! bluesy and raw!


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post Sep 16 2010, 11:34 AM
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Thanks Bogdan and Daniel!

I will resing some out of tune stuff n raise the vocals a bit.
Always try to hide my voice in that heavy distortion!
Thanks again feedbacking will upload new version soon.
Keep rockin!


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