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post Sep 19 2010, 11:26 AM
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Hi all,

i tried to record a second lesson once again of Gabriel Leopardi, i hope you could help me to take advantage of your experience after watching the video:



the original lesson is here: https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/solo-guit...ciante-lesson2/

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post Sep 19 2010, 12:47 PM
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It's pretty good man .. I like it .. You're not following strict alternate picking everywhere but that's not an issue at all smile.gif


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post Sep 19 2010, 02:24 PM
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I think your tone is pretty good, full and round,

notes are all in there,

There's two issues: Tuning is off, before recording make sure your guitar is properly tuned.

And second, your timing is a bit off, you are placing the notes some miliseconds before the beat almost always. In this type of lesson notes need to be as on the beat as possible,





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post Sep 19 2010, 03:00 PM
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I think you have some great foundation to work on with your playing. The tuning thing is easy to fix. With that kind of piece, just don't rush. It's all about feeling the phrasing. You are playing it well, but now FEEL it. Nice take. Just my two cents though as I tend not to feel pieces and have no objectivity with my own playing.

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post Sep 19 2010, 06:44 PM
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well to be perfectly honnest i think that my guitar has a few problems, because when it's tuned (tuning done with the amp integrated tuner) it sounds quiet bad in the trebbles, i bought a new guitar that i should receive soon... well i'm getting serious about guitar and i need good stuff for that! But yeah that's true it sounds untuned... about timing, ok, i'll try to improve that,thanks for pointing this!

and last thing, sorry formy bad english, i'm not a native english spoker!!


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post Sep 20 2010, 11:57 AM
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Very good take. Just concentrate on the feeling and timing because with tunes like this rushing can be easily sensed. Try to play it on the beat. Also what could improve performance of this tune is nice vibrato. Check out this series of lessons if you haven't already - https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/Bens-Vibrato-Odyssey/ . They will do wonders for your technique.


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post Sep 20 2010, 01:54 PM
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ok, i see, i'll try to work on vibrato asap, sure that the result will be better! And the more i listen to the rec the more i feel that it's really untuned, how can i imlprove the tuning in the trebbles, because the sound is really bad after the 12th fret


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