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post Oct 3 2010, 03:16 AM
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Hello Master Class
Its been a long time. Thought I'd get my feet wet and toss this one out here to the public ears.
Been working on my phrasing a bit. Let me know if its working.....

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post Oct 3 2010, 03:37 PM
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Phrasing is very nice, The only thing I would say is that I would like the guitar tone to be a bit brighter, But thats more a matter of personal preference. Otherwise very nice, chords sound excellent.
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post Oct 3 2010, 10:53 PM
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Very nice smile.gif
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post Oct 5 2010, 04:15 PM
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very nice man! and very nice bt too! I liked a lot the melody. there's some timing problem here and there, but it's well played overall. I would add more vibrato on long notes.
beside this tiny details, it's very good!
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post Oct 5 2010, 05:33 PM
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Thanks for sharing, man! Nice melodies in there!

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post Oct 5 2010, 09:06 PM
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I like it a lot!

very original and risky


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post Oct 11 2010, 03:15 AM
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Thanks guys. Seems like the phrasing is on the right track then...

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