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post Nov 14 2010, 06:16 AM
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In my 700 year absence away from the interwebnets I got a lot stuff recorded, here is one such tune. Instrumental which is actually the third and final part of a trilogy of songs, finished it first so it goes up first. Check it out and let me know what you think.




I wish the piano bit at the end was more varied, but I'm not much of a piano/ key player or composer so any ideas there I would appreciate, although I like the repeated fading melody.
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post Nov 14 2010, 12:21 PM
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that's one fast kickdrum near the end! I like the vibe of the piano. Good tune


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post Nov 15 2010, 09:28 PM
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Great composition, some awesome stuff in there! smile.gif

I would suggest a bit more attention in the mix on the snare drum. It's in front, and a bit loud, perhaps lowering down just a bit, and inserting just a bit of ambience on it would help. Just a though from me mate.


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post Nov 15 2010, 11:03 PM
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Thanks guys! Always appreciate the input from more experienced musicians, I'll try working with the snare a bit like you suggested.
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