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Karl-ss
post Nov 26 2010, 02:50 AM
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Well, seeing as my band members have both been busy with their damn side project for about five months, I have decided to turn to you guys. The song is far from finished, but the general atmosphere and feel of the song is there. I'd also like to ask here, that is if anyone listens.

Is anyone feeling like helping me make these songs into real songs? And not just leave them as midi construct for years?
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post Nov 26 2010, 03:47 AM
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Sounds great, I like it very much smile.gif
If you lived closer to bergen or kristiansand, Id be all in for audition to help you wink.gif

The beginning feels like an 8 bit game, I love it. Very cool song idea!
What help do you need? You could write the bass line and if you have a drummerfriend who could write down some drums in guitar pro. Then record guitars yourself, and maybye someone you know know someone who can mix it down real well? smile.gif

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post Nov 26 2010, 03:50 AM
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wow man.. how did you compose all these signatures? So many variations in timing and indeed really nice. It might be lacking some lead portions as I only hear much of rhythms going on. But its amazing how you have come up with all those complex timings. smile.gif Have you considered actually recording it?


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post Nov 26 2010, 10:34 AM
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Dude, that track is excellent... by the sounds of it, you don't need any help.. you're doing a fine job on your own ! Great chords and melodies there... non of it is predictable, which is a good thing and unpredictable chords and melodies is something I look for in music ! smile.gif


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post Nov 26 2010, 03:38 PM
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QUOTE (Sollesnes @ Nov 26 2010, 03:47 AM) *
Sounds great, I like it very much smile.gif
If you lived closer to bergen or kristiansand, Id be all in for audition to help you wink.gif

The beginning feels like an 8 bit game, I love it. Very cool song idea!
What help do you need? You could write the bass line and if you have a drummerfriend who could write down some drums in guitar pro. Then record guitars yourself, and maybye someone you know know someone who can mix it down real well? smile.gif


The thing is, I am the bassist/vocalist of the band, so ya I am pretty much looking for anyone that is willing to record the guitar parts for me, hah.

Also thanks to everyone for the positive feedbacks. I had high hopes for this one.


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post Nov 26 2010, 05:26 PM
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yes! it's really well written, keep at it!


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post Nov 29 2010, 07:28 PM
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It's a well written draft for a song. I would strongly advise that you record the guitars and program the drums in some DAW software, depending what you use. This would make it sound like a real song. MIDI is good, but only as a draft. I would like to hear to "real thing". Could you do this? If you need any help regarding this, I will gladly help smile.gif


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