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post Dec 10 2010, 04:45 PM
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ill be honest, i changed some parts, some to fit me better and some because im still working on perfecting them(mosrtly the sweeping part, im pretty close but i dont exactly have much practice time since im in the army)
i currently have only audio cause i dont know how to match the video with the audio, maybe ill do it tomorrow maybe in 2 weeks, but in the meantime i would love to hear some opinions on the playing.
no matter if your not instructors, i want to hear what you think.
feedback is the only way to improve wink.gif and we all have ears.

edit:beter version,more nalaced bt

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post Dec 10 2010, 08:08 PM
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wow, great take! well played, good tone! good timing.

a couple of bends are a bit out of tune

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post Dec 11 2010, 09:06 AM
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I can tell you've put a good deal of work in this so well done! Daniel is right about a few bends being not quite there but I"m sure you can work that out. Try to do some drills that focus on your bends and do it with music and try to hear the point the note wants to bend to. Repetition is the key!


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post Dec 11 2010, 01:00 PM
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Wow, you sure have put some work there! smile.gif I really like your tone, and your timing is mostly really tight. I, too, suggest that you work on your bends to get the right feel for the song. Mostly the issue (which isn't really that big) here is the "touch", you've got to feel the notes, the reason why they are played like they are.

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post Dec 11 2010, 05:10 PM
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I really liked it

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post Dec 11 2010, 05:50 PM
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Wow, great take man, you are good smile.gif

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post Dec 11 2010, 06:47 PM
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Great job ! That's not an easy piece of music to play either smile.gif

The guys have already made reference to some bending issues etc, but I'd say you're totally on the right track !!

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post Dec 11 2010, 11:46 PM
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Very good man, sounds pretty cool, and your tone is nice as well! Keep rockin man! smile.gif

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