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> Guns N Roses 1th Solo, Lessone
Frank
post Mar 29 2011, 03:19 AM
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I need some constuctive advice please. : smile.gif
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post Mar 29 2011, 03:36 AM
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2 main problems:

1) Timing: e.g. at 0:09 it's rushed, too fast.

2) Bending to the right notes: e.g. the bend at 0:11 is a tiny bit too sharp

Also, careful at 0:18 when you're sliding up, need to mute those open strings.
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It sounds good so far, just keep practicing with more focus on the above areas.

Nearly there man!


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Ivan Milenkovic
post Mar 31 2011, 08:13 PM
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Sounds very good, lots of feel there, and your picking and tone are good as well.

One thing that needs work is timing. Try to analyze the tabs, and tap your foot so you understand where in the bar you find certain notes. Although your version was not in time, it can pass as a bit syncopated version. If you want authentic sounding solo, try adapting timing a bit.


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post Apr 1 2011, 04:58 PM
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Thank you fore the comments Guys.
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