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post May 12 2011, 05:58 AM
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Basically, I would just like to know which one of these is a proper/ more accurate translation. I find "free" online sources often contradict each other. I am an ok speaker when it comes to german, but when it comes to strict spelling and sentence structure I always confuse myself. So....

Vengeance of the Galaxy (for a song/ short story)

Rache der Galaxie

Or would it be

rachen der Galaxie

Which would be more "proper"? Any help is much appreciated!
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post May 12 2011, 06:55 AM
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QUOTE (The Uncreator @ May 12 2011, 05:58 AM) *
Basically, I would just like to know which one of these is a proper/ more accurate translation. I find "free" online sources often contradict each other. I am an ok speaker when it comes to german, but when it comes to strict spelling and sentence structure I always confuse myself. So....

Vengeance of the Galaxy (for a song/ short story)

Rache der Galaxie

Or would it be

rachen der Galaxie

Which would be more "proper"? Any help is much appreciated!


"Rache der Galaxie" is correct,but "Vergeltung der Galaxie" is a better german.
(rachen is here not correct)


Cheers
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post May 12 2011, 07:41 AM
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hey there!

it must be 'Rache der Galaxie'

waiting for the whole story :-)

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post May 12 2011, 07:45 AM
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http://www.writersbeat.com/showthread.php?t=31252

If you want to read it, go ahead! I'd love to hear what you guys think smile.gif

It does get a bit graphic though, at the end.
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post May 12 2011, 07:57 AM
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thanks for the link, just did a printout and will read it tonight - in calm wink.gif
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