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post Sep 3 2011, 05:13 PM
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Here is a solo i composed for my bands first song tell me what you think.

and sorry for the coughing in the video i got a major cold


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post Sep 3 2011, 05:17 PM
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Hey man, I think it was really cool!! I like it! smile.gif I hope you feel better soon. I know how that cough is. sad.gif


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post Sep 3 2011, 05:32 PM
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I like it
and the cough plays
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post Sep 3 2011, 06:36 PM
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Sounded good bro, you have grown a great deal over the last few years as a player. congrats!


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post Sep 3 2011, 07:58 PM
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Hope you feel better soon Isac. That's a great solo man. Try to make it a bit more simpler in some parts tho, insert a cool long bend in the first part too. All of it is awesome, and I think those are just the elements that you need.


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post Sep 3 2011, 09:46 PM
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Nice clean take , like it ,congratz !


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post Sep 4 2011, 09:59 PM
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I like it!! I love the mid tempo of the arpeggios, sounds very clear.

I think you should create a variation on this version, because this still sounds a bit generic, but I think once you do a twist on your first attempt it will be fresher.


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post Sep 5 2011, 06:18 PM
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i like it man, but if you are open for suggestions, i would make a different picking for the sweep slow part, why do you need to sweep there? i would like to hear heavy picking on those arpeggios.

Also agree with ivan, you should do a break on the first part, a long note, a fx, something wink.gif


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post Sep 5 2011, 07:49 PM
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QUOTE (jstcrsn @ Sep 3 2011, 05:32 PM) *
and the cough plays


Yeah it does.. the cough works ! cool.gif

I really like the solo.. I would make the end stronger though, it sounds like it just ends abruptly with no drama.


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