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post Sep 21 2011, 05:51 PM
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This is a song I played with my former band, where I played lead guitar. The production could've been better, but we didn't have money for professional production. I didn't write the song, only my solo and some harmonies. Anyway, I would like to hear your thoughts on this song, cheers smile.gif

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oeL4VB9gzIQ

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Ivan Milenkovic
post Sep 21 2011, 07:33 PM
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Sounds great man! smile.gif The riffs and solo parts are great, and the intro is somewhat epic smile.gif

I think the main thing that creates problem for me here is bass. It sounds like guitar with an octaver to me, that must be arranged. Vocals are awesome, a bit in the background, but very good.

Excellent job, sounds very good, I bet it would sound awesome on a live gig smile.gif


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post Sep 21 2011, 09:07 PM
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post Sep 21 2011, 09:22 PM
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Excellent guitars and decent production! I like it, svaka cast wink.gif


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post Sep 21 2011, 11:49 PM
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Thanks people, I really appreciate your feedback! smile.gif

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I think the main thing that creates problem for me here is bass. It sounds like guitar with an octaver to me, that must be arranged.


Yep, true that, it's a shame because some riffs can't even be heard properly...


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post Sep 22 2011, 09:56 AM
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Woohah! biggrin.gif like the composition! You are skilled my friend! I also like the clean vocals, but the distorted ones could be more up front and clearer. It's a lil' difficult to come up with a good clean screaming technique, such as fry screaming for example.

Are you still in this kind of music? Do you play in another band?


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post Sep 22 2011, 10:53 AM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Sep 22 2011, 08:56 AM) *
Woohah! biggrin.gif like the composition! You are skilled my friend! I also like the clean vocals, but the distorted ones could be more up front and clearer. It's a lil' difficult to come up with a good clean screaming technique, such as fry screaming for example.

Are you still in this kind of music? Do you play in another band?


Thanks for your comment man smile.gif Well no, I was actually never really into metalcore/death metal, I'm more of a heavy metal/power/prog man. Not a fan of growling... Where I live, it's really hard to find a band that suits my needs, the bands here are usually punk rock/thrash/death. That's why the songs I write/play for the most part aren't suitable for any of them...


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post Sep 22 2011, 11:08 AM
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QUOTE (Dinaga @ Sep 22 2011, 09:53 AM) *
Thanks for your comment man smile.gif Well no, I was actually never really into metalcore/death metal, I'm more of a heavy metal/power/prog man. Not a fan of growling... Where I live, it's really hard to find a band that suits my needs, the bands here are usually punk rock/thrash/death. That's why the songs I write/play for the most part aren't suitable for any of them...


Have faith man! I perfectly understand what searching means...I turned out to be a vocalist in one of my bands just because we couldn't find any pros out there who would understand, assimilate and love what we're doing smile.gif but I am very happy with my choice! It helps me develop certain aspects which would've never risen otherwise biggrin.gif


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post Sep 22 2011, 11:19 AM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Sep 22 2011, 10:08 AM) *
Have faith man! I perfectly understand what searching means...I turned out to be a vocalist in one of my bands just because we couldn't find any pros out there who would understand, assimilate and love what we're doing smile.gif but I am very happy with my choice! It helps me develop certain aspects which would've never risen otherwise biggrin.gif


That's great! The most important thing is to stick with what you love and play it with passion... smile.gif


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post Sep 22 2011, 11:36 AM
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QUOTE (Dinaga @ Sep 22 2011, 10:19 AM) *
That's great! The most important thing is to stick with what you love and play it with passion... smile.gif


Wisely spoken! smile.gif looking forward to seeing you at tonight's v-chat smile.gif


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post Sep 23 2011, 03:05 AM
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oh, I'm liking it right away! sounds passionate! I love that


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post Sep 23 2011, 03:46 AM
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hey that's some nice metal/punk love it!!


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post Sep 23 2011, 05:03 AM
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Great song man! I like that epic introduction, and I also like the vocals! The clean voice is very original. The solos are also killer! I can hear some Metallica, some Trivium but also a lot of personality. Good job! smile.gif


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post Sep 23 2011, 04:00 PM
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Wow, I didn't expect so many people would give feedback, thanks a lot mates, it really means a lot to me smile.gif


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