What Do You Think About My Bands Original Song |
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Oct 30 2011, 09:11 PM
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I know i already posted this but i wanted to get some pointers on what you guys think about the song.
We are going to create more own songs and its a good thing to get some tips on what we could have done better about this one -------------------- My Gear
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Oct 30 2011, 10:43 PM
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It sounds quite good man. Have you considered getting singer/frontmen into a band? It would upgrade the overall thing greatly.
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Oct 30 2011, 11:00 PM
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hey man! first of all... congrats again for your first song. I think that the main idea is really good. The chord progression and the rhythm combined to that piano idea sound perfect.
One thing that I feel when I hear the song is that it could be a bit shorter, maybe you could check the structure and repetitions for this one or have it in mind for future songs. -------------------- My lessons
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Oct 31 2011, 12:53 AM
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hey man, great, i'm very glad you are writing songs, i think you need somehow (and obviously) need more experience doing them, but for a fist song is really good, i suggest you change a bit the guitars, you are two guitas there and most of the time both of you are playing the same, why is that?
i think you should be playing all the leads as well, the other guy has a nervios sound, or something like that, or maybe he needs more practice/experience  keep it up man! This post has been edited by Adrian Figallo: Oct 31 2011, 12:53 AM --------------------  Check my Instructor Profile Rockers! Got a Blog too!, www.adriantracks.com Follow me on facebook and youtube! -Youtube   |
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Oct 31 2011, 05:19 PM
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In addition to the above I would have nothing to add on that subject, perhaps the only visual setting- keyboard takes up too much space! Rotate it 90 or 45 degrees towards you
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Oct 31 2011, 05:56 PM
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you guys also need a bass player in my opinion, i like the doors for example, they don't have a bass player, but ray is an incredible musician and he could play the basslines on the keyboard.
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Nov 1 2011, 04:58 PM
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Thanks for the tips
I will take them in mind the next time we are writing a song -------------------- My Gear
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