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Ryan View Member Profile	Jun 6 2007, 01:20 AM
Jun 6 2007, 01:20 AM	GMC:er Posts: 1.286 Joined: 14-March 07 From: Hutchinson, Kansas, USA	Ok, i get bored all the time..and come up with lil songs or w/e....or riffs....and i just put them on GP, since my webcam sucks..its hard to record all this and...not have it so crappy that you cant tell whats going on...so well i made these GP files..and i want you guys to tell me how good they are...what they need...what they have 2 much of...or what... also note:...I SUCK AT GP First 1...I made it about 2 months ago...i dont like it..but i got bored.and GPed it out Metal_Fantasyish.gp5 ( 2.58K ) Number of downloads: 103 here is a lil lick.for sweepss..i got bored lol..REALLY BORED...so i was just trying something new lol Sweeps_1.gp5 ( 1.98K ) Number of downloads: 93 and here is a piece am actually currently working on...ITS NOT YET COMPLETE VERY INCOMPLETE TO BE PRECISE...it changes all the time...so dont critize on how its not phrasing well...or w/e....its a WORK IN PROGRESS lol Dark_Day.gp5 ( 4.45K ) Number of downloads: 88 and here is a lil tapping thing i made up today....i got really bored..i think its kinda classicalish..maybe neoclassicalish..idk..but i think it sounds nice...tell me what you think!! Tapping_1_Classicalish.gp5 ( 6.37K ) Number of downloads: 98 sorry i wish i could just record all this stuff.but well....i need money to get me recording stuff first.....i just need some info on wha ti should be working on....and jsut everything..give me your advice PLEASE!! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Ryan: Jun 6 2007, 01:44 AM -------------------- “Obey the principles without being bound by them.”

Yonrak View Member Profile	Jun 6 2007, 10:42 PM
Jun 6 2007, 10:42 PM	GMC:er Posts: 25 Joined: 20-May 07	I love the Neo Classical tapping, very nice - Might learn it actually For some reason it reminds me of either Zelda of Final Fantasy lol The "Dark Day" one sounds very good up to bar 6 - Then goes messy, but like you say, a work in progress. I'd say if you keep fiddling about with stuff like this you'll end up being quite the songwriter You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Yonrak: Jun 6 2007, 10:42 PM

Ryan View Member Profile	Jun 6 2007, 10:46 PM
Jun 6 2007, 10:46 PM	GMC:er Posts: 1.286 Joined: 14-March 07 From: Hutchinson, Kansas, USA	yea that neoclassical tapping hting...its not done iether..im thinking about adding LOTS more to it.a.nd the dark day....;fffffffffffff THATS A PAIN IN THAT A$$..lol..i cant figure nothing out to go with it..lol..i think im just gonna redo everytrhiung..after all the repeats....thx for the comments though You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- “Obey the principles without being bound by them.”

The Uncreator View Member Profile	Jun 7 2007, 02:52 PM
Jun 7 2007, 02:52 PM	Fire Up The Blades, Moderator Posts: 8.933 Joined: 6-March 07 From: St. Petersburg, Florida	I like the first 5-6 bars of Dark Day, and the Neo-Classical Tapping thing was cool as well, nice little pattern, Zelda-ish like someone said before Since were doin GP Stuff, tell me what you think of some of my stuff. First one is a slower one, and i know, i need a better transition to the distorted riffs, the second solo is kinda weird, and the everything after the second solo is experimental. The second one, i just think is really cool, after i made it into GP, I realized it was quite Pavel-ish. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by The Uncreator: Jun 7 2007, 02:54 PM Attached File(s) The_Fountain.gp5 ( 52.33K ) Number of downloads: 61 Mystical_Old_Bard.gp5 ( 11.23K ) Number of downloads: 50

Ryan View Member Profile	Jun 7 2007, 11:44 PM
Jun 7 2007, 11:44 PM	GMC:er Posts: 1.286 Joined: 14-March 07 From: Hutchinson, Kansas, USA	QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Jun 7 2007, 08:52 AM) I like the first 5-6 bars of Dark Day, and the Neo-Classical Tapping thing was cool as well, nice little pattern, Zelda-ish like someone said before Since were doin GP Stuff, tell me what you think of some of my stuff. First one is a slower one, and i know, i need a better transition to the distorted riffs, the second solo is kinda weird, and the everything after the second solo is experimental. The second one, i just think is really cool, after i made it into GP, I realized it was quite Pavel-ish. yea...the first 5 bars..are there to stay..after thats..thats...trial, adn error..type of stuff......adn the 2nd ..neo-clascial..tapping..lol..not meant to be zeldaish..but i guess it is..lol...that took me..like 5 mins to make..lol...i want to extend it someday..and make it into a real song..liek after that..that being the intro..then its just kinda slowly calms down to silence..for lil bit..then..BOOM..or somethign lol..idk..im gonna check out yoru pieces...now.......this post actually might start getting really good i really like the begiinning of the fountain..and the 2nd 1.....its cool You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Ryan: Jun 8 2007, 12:07 AM -------------------- “Obey the principles without being bound by them.”

Aaron View Member Profile	Jun 7 2007, 11:52 PM
Jun 7 2007, 11:52 PM	GMC:er Posts: 137 Joined: 11-May 07	sounds pretty sweet You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- DON'T BUG ME ... I'M PRACTICING Gear: (new) fender strat , 25g frontman amp, Wishlist: Ibanez Jem, Flying V natural.

The Uncreator View Member Profile	Jun 8 2007, 01:02 AM
Jun 8 2007, 01:02 AM	Fire Up The Blades, Moderator Posts: 8.933 Joined: 6-March 07 From: St. Petersburg, Florida	QUOTE (Ryan @ Jun 7 2007, 06:44 PM) yea...the first 5 bars..are there to stay..after thats..thats...trial, adn error..type of stuff......adn the 2nd ..neo-clascial..tapping..lol..not meant to be zeldaish..but i guess it is..lol...that took me..like 5 mins to make..lol...i want to extend it someday..and make it into a real song..liek after that..that being the intro..then its just kinda slowly calms down to silence..for lil bit..then..BOOM..or somethign lol..idk..im gonna check out yoru pieces...now.......this post actually might start getting really good i really like the begiinning of the fountain..and the 2nd 1.....its cool Just to say, the beginning of Dark Day kinda reminds me of Death, (Which is a very good thing comin from me, i love Death ) I think those first bars of Dark Day could easily become a sick ass solo, just end up in some Epic kinda stuff. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Ryan View Member Profile	Jun 8 2007, 02:20 AM
Jun 8 2007, 02:20 AM	GMC:er Posts: 1.286 Joined: 14-March 07 From: Hutchinson, Kansas, USA	QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Jun 7 2007, 07:02 PM) Just to say, the beginning of Dark Day kinda reminds me of Death, (Which is a very good thing comin from me, i love Death ) I think those first bars of Dark Day could easily become a sick ass solo, just end up in some Epic kinda stuff. yea...well its a work in progress..i htink ifi want to fully bring out its potential..im gonna have to wait..till i get betterin theory..and riffs..and just become a better guitarist...all together...so i can really let that shine You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- “Obey the principles without being bound by them.”

FretDancer69 View Member Profile	Jun 11 2007, 06:57 AM
Jun 11 2007, 06:57 AM	GMC:er Posts: 2.442 Joined: 11-June 07 From: Honduras	Hey Ryan, the Dark Day song was very nice, i think you should keep with the intro a couple of more bars, like overwrite the 6th bar with more intro stuff. I think that if you work alot on it, itll become a great song. Also, Uncreator, I liked The Fountain alot, really it has a great intro and gets more interesting when the electric guitar jumps in, i might start writing some GP stuff too, since i love to write songs and riffs, im not that good with GP tho, i dont understand much of the 4/4 thing You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Playing Guitar Since: December 2006

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