(original) Star Nebula *metal/post Rock*
Vulpine
Oct 23 2012, 05:52 AM
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song I wrote hope you like , would love to know what you guys think

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3dqOdg3Df0Y...eature=youtu.be

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Vulpine
Oct 26 2012, 03:22 PM
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QUOTE (Vulpine @ Oct 23 2012, 04:52 AM) *
song I wrote hope you like , would love to know what you guys think

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3dqOdg3Df0Y...eature=youtu.be



Broken Link! sorry bout that

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c7BdN3Z7_bo&feature=g-upl

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Todd Simpson
Oct 26 2012, 08:34 PM
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Some fine riffing there! Your playing is is good and the pace is nice and even. The tone is working well also. Congrats on a spiff recording! I know it's a huge pain/challenge, but try to get in to multi tracking / DAW (e.g. Reaper etc.) ASAP so you can start putting tracks together with Drums (vst drums work fine) and Bass, so you can create entire arrangments. It's a big step to take but well worth the effort.

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vonhotch
Oct 27 2012, 02:07 AM
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Man you just keep crankin them out. biggrin.gif Nice one. I like the tone, of both parts. The second part was pretty trippy I love reverb.

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Gabriel Leopardi
Oct 30 2012, 12:47 AM
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Hey mate! This tune is so cool! I like the first part since it sounds like a trip... I feel going to space in that section... and then starts clean section and I fall in love with the track... as we talk in the Army's thread, you have some Buckethead influences but you also have your own music there. I like it a lot.. you just have to adjust the playing in the overall thing and add some other instruments arrangements and you will be ready to sell this one on itunes! smile.gif

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Ben Higgins
Oct 30 2012, 06:56 PM
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I really like this smile.gif

Both sections have something worth listening to.. they've got their own moods.

One thing wroth mentioning is that when you single out that main riff around 1.06 I really like how you are able to hit those semi harmonics whilst playing a riff. A lot of people struggle to get that but it's really cool that you can do it. cool.gif

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Cosmin Lupu
Oct 31 2012, 10:10 AM
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Uh... I arrived to late sad.gif I can't access it anymore..

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Vulpine
Oct 31 2012, 04:51 PM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Oct 31 2012, 09:10 AM) *
Uh... I arrived to late sad.gif I can't access it anymore..


the first link was broken (check out the second post) or click here

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Cosmin Lupu
Nov 2 2012, 01:15 PM
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Mate! As with all your compositions, the ideas are good, but you have to give them a direction and fluidity smile.gif

I like both the main riff and the more mellow part coming into play from the middle onwards and I would add that the mellow part would need some more spaciness using effects - reverb, delay mayhaps?

Keep em coming man! They'll get better and better!

Cosmin

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