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Vulpine
post Oct 24 2012, 06:50 PM
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heres a song I just uploaded , it def has some influences in there anyway if you wouldnt mind *critique*

would love to hear some feed back

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DeD_sDJjsrk&feature=plcp
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Cosmin Lupu
post Oct 25 2012, 10:51 AM
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Hello again!

Very nice vibe here! My only suggestion would be to pay a little more attention at the timing and articulation in the theme played over the delay based lines.

As a general observation, you have the music in you amigo smile.gif All you have to do now is polish it biggrin.gif Are you just improvising or have you thought up these lead lines thoroughly and then played them?

Looking forward to hear more stuff!

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post Oct 25 2012, 05:10 PM
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Hello again!

Very nice vibe here! My only suggestion would be to pay a little more attention at the timing and articulation in the theme played over the delay based lines.

As a general observation, you have the music in you amigo smile.gif All you have to do now is polish it biggrin.gif Are you just improvising or have you thought up these lead lines thoroughly and then played them?

Looking forward to hear more stuff!

Cosmin


Hey Cosmin it means alot to hear feedback from you thanx, and yea the melody part was thought up n although some other lines were thought up this song was mostly improvised I listened to the melody n base lines alot before i improvised n practiced a bit n then I could hear alittle of what I wanted to play n then I knew i needed to record soon before I lose those ideas
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post Oct 25 2012, 10:07 PM
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Well, my advice here is to work in smaller bits of the song, not all at once and then link the ideas smile.gif


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post Oct 25 2012, 10:25 PM
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Nice tune mate. I can hear some Buckethead vibes on it which is really cool for me. As Cosmin said, with more definition you music could be taken to a new level. Keep on doing this stuff!


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post Oct 26 2012, 07:45 AM
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And please post more songs! smile.gif


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