New Song I Made Critique, out with the old in with the new |
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Oct 29 2012, 07:06 AM
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This is something I came up with, just wanted to get it critiqued and such.. The solos a little off but it was in 1 take since it was the only time i could get my friend to record it. over all i'm satisfied just wanna hear others opinions on it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M0994g6wQzc...eature=youtu.be |
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Oct 29 2012, 10:25 AM
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Hey bro,
Nice job as I posted on your video great tone theres LTD for you : ) . n you really did a good job of staying in rhythm with the drums the recording part sounded professional Although this isnt my taste when Im listening to hard rock or metal which doesnt matter from a general point of view this is playing at a pro level . If there was one thing i would mention that could use alil improvement is your phrasing in the solo abit, ur bends sound great btw, but when u were ending ur solo u bended n resolved to a note with a vibrato n then u stopped applying the vibrato halfway while u were still playing that note. was barely noticable tho it all happnd within a second. but if u hold the vibrato until u've let go of the note or slide out of that note to end ur phrase it would sound better Imo but other then that this was great mix = ) If you would critique https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gaox...eature=youtu.be This post has been edited by Vulpine: Oct 29 2012, 10:34 AM |
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Oct 29 2012, 05:22 PM
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Oct 30 2012, 12:29 AM
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QUOTE (Vulpine @ Oct 29 2012, 04:22 PM)  It's a broken link :/ I can't see it man. |
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Oct 30 2012, 12:36 AM
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Hey man! Thanks for sharing your music here at GMC! Your composition is very good. The riffs sound like a professional band and are played perfectly. The solos as you said sound a bit off, I like the idea of combining chords with Sweep Pciking arpeggios, but you have to recheck the chord that is sounding with the arpeggio that you are playing, and also be careful with the note where you bend, because it doesn't sound good over the chord sounding. Try reaching a note from the chord with the bend...
Besides that the overall idea is very interesting, keep on working on it! 
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