Song Wip, Feedback Appreciated
Socky42
Nov 12 2012, 12:38 AM
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Obviously a very raw recording for feedback purposes laugh.gif

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Cosmin Lupu
Nov 12 2012, 09:28 AM
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Howdy man!

This sounds like a furious song but you need to work on the fast parts and make them sound tighter and in good timing. Otherwise it could make a good OST for a fight scene in a movie, if you are to ask me biggrin.gif

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Gabriel Leopardi
Nov 12 2012, 04:17 PM
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It sounds good! I like the composition and the string arrangements... it's true what Cosmin says about your guitar playing, you should adjust it a bit to make it sound tight as this style requires. Keep on the great work!

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Ben Higgins
Nov 13 2012, 01:11 PM
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Sounds brilliant ! It's like Judas Priest's Painkiller album meets Yngwie !

I think the arrangement and note choice is great.. just clean it up and tighten the timing !! smile.gif

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Socky42
Nov 15 2012, 04:02 AM
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Thanks for the help guys, I'll definitely work on the timing, which is probably the weakest part of my playing.

Already managed to tighten it up a bit by changing the guitar and bass tones.

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vonhotch
Nov 15 2012, 04:16 AM
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I hope you will share a final version of this. I like the way everything is layered together. It has a great feel to it.

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Cosmin Lupu
Nov 15 2012, 08:15 AM
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Looking forward towards the final version myself smile.gif

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