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post Jan 27 2013, 04:48 PM
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That's a nice take. Some of my noobish remarks:
1.I think you should work on the overall feel- you have cool ideas. Try to think about your solo as a whole, not a separate licks.
2.Some timing issues
3.I like the beginning of the chorus very much.
4.A very strange bend on 0:55. As for me it's out of pitch.

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post Jan 27 2013, 05:05 PM
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QUOTE (Jouve @ Jan 27 2013, 03:48 PM) *
That's a nice take. Some of my noobish remarks:
1.I think you should work on the overall feel- you have cool ideas. Try to think about your solo as a whole, not a separate licks.
2.Some timing issues
3.I like the beginning of the chorus very much.
4.A very strange bend on 0:55. As for me it's out of pitch.

It's good. Keep rocking!


They're not noobish at all Jouve! smile.gif Personally, I thought that I'd bent that note a little too high myself, but my ears were tired so I thought it must be only me. But I re recorded it, I think I solved the problem smile.gif

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Yes it sounds better.

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QUOTE (enlo22 @ Jan 26 2013, 02:12 PM) *
i was thinking about it, is it necessary or no? cause i still have to improve this one lol



It would be great it you can record something over it, but if not, there is no problem, I can edit the backing. wink.gif

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I'm impressed Grace! An you said that you wasn't sure to join!! You take is VERY good!! Thanks for joining. smile.gif

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I like this take. It's rhythmic, the tone is superb and the harmonies sound way cool. Will you shoot two videos? :-)

I just realized that this was my first post in this thread.. So I guess I can't hide anymore, pretending I didn't see it. There will be something posted in due time, I hope. cool.gif


hehehe a collab can''t be finished without two takes:

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QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Jan 27 2013, 06:55 PM) *
2. HFH's Duet biggrin.gif

What? Does it really HAVE TO be a duet? ohmy.gif
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QUOTE (sammetal92 @ Jan 27 2013, 01:05 PM) *
They're not noobish at all Jouve! smile.gif Personally, I thought that I'd bent that note a little too high myself, but my ears were tired so I thought it must be only me. But I re recorded it, I think I solved the problem smile.gif

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It's great how much you improved your take comparing this one with the previous one! It sounds much better, the composition and also your playing. This take could work for the collab, but if you still want to improve it, concentrate even more on timing, and expression (vibrato and bending). Also I feel that your guitar is a bit out of tune in the last melodies...


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Is this the same young lady that was saying she couldn't do some if these collabs? I'm confused... huh.gif That was Killer!


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Is this the same young lady that was saying she couldn't do some if these collabs? I'm confused... huh.gif That was Killer!



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QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Jan 27 2013, 06:30 PM) *
It's great how much you improved your take comparing this one with the previous one! It sounds much better, the composition and also your playing. This take could work for the collab, but if you still want to improve it, concentrate even more on timing, and expression (vibrato and bending). Also I feel that your guitar is a bit out of tune in the last melodies...


I'll see if I can improve it enough in time, otherwise if you will have it in the collab, it'll work for me smile.gif


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I'll see if I can improve it enough in time, otherwise if you will have it in the collab, it'll work for me smile.gif



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Nice one GRACE!!!! This is shaping up to be KILLER collab!




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Oh gosh you guys..... rolleyes.gif Thank you all so much!! I will admit I do feel a little intimidated sometimes with so many guys around and barely any girls but then I remember you're all a bunch of sweethearts! happy.gif You guys rock! Keep posting awesome take!


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QUOTE (Grace @ Jan 28 2013, 12:03 AM) *
Oh gosh you guys..... rolleyes.gif Thank you all so much!! I will admit I do feel a little intimidated sometimes with so many guys around and barely any girls but then I remember you're all a bunch of sweethearts! happy.gif You guys rock! Keep posting awesome take!


No need to feel intimidated around us... smile.gif Just keep rockin, that was a really nice melodic take like H4H said... Plus I could see that dark side you were talkin about the other day... wink.gif

I told you that you outta come out and play with the boys... smile.gif Teach us sumptin.... we needs all the learnin we can get!

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Seriously, that was a great take... I'm just hoping I can get around to it.

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QUOTE (mroberts70 @ Jan 28 2013, 05:17 AM) *
No need to feel intimidated around us... smile.gif Just keep rockin, that was a really nice melodic take like H4H said... Plus I could see that dark side you were talkin about the other day... wink.gif

I told you that you outta come out and play with the boys... smile.gif Teach us sumptin.... we needs all the learnin we can get!

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Seriously, that was a great take... I'm just hoping I can get around to it.

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Plus I could see that dark side you were talkin about the other day... wink.gif


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I just didn't wanna have too much and then have it be all sloppy loll


QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Jan 27 2013, 05:55 PM) *
It would be great it you can record something over it, but if not, there is no problem, I can edit the backing. wink.gif




I'm impressed Grace! An you said that you wasn't sure to join!! You take is VERY good!! Thanks for joining. smile.gif



hehehe a collab can''t be finished without two takes:

1. The German Guy's take
2. HFH's Duet biggrin.gif





ok guys, here's my solo mixed into it! tell me your thoughts etc..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_xi-yztH2LA...eature=youtu.be

this is my first collab so i'm exited about it ! smile.gif hope i can get the files to go through i wihs i wasn't as computer illiterate lol


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QUOTE (enlo22 @ Jan 28 2013, 07:28 AM) *
ok guys, here's my solo mixed into it! tell me your thoughts etc..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_xi-yztH2LA...eature=youtu.be

Sounds good, man. The mini trill at the very end is brilliant! smile.gif
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QUOTE (enlo22 @ Jan 28 2013, 06:28 AM) *
I just didn't wanna have too much and then have it be all sloppy loll

ok guys, here's my solo mixed into it! tell me your thoughts etc..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_xi-yztH2LA...eature=youtu.be

this is my first collab so i'm exited about it ! smile.gif hope i can get the files to go through i wihs i wasn't as computer illiterate lol


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Something like this. rolleyes.gif

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you wer't foolin anyone, we new you couldn't resist the power of the Priest


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I know I know but you know...I guess it's a girl thing...thanks again Mark smile.gif and yes lol you can hear a little bit of my dark side there rolleyes.gif

Teach you??? laugh.gif I'm the ones who needs learnin laugh.gif


Oh Grace, Mrobertson hasn't been specific, in term what he needs to be "taught" cool.gif

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Something like this. rolleyes.gif


Yeah, i like that Russian lick at the end!!
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