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post Feb 19 2013, 06:51 AM
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Ok guys, this is a new track I came up with. I'm actually happy with it. I would like to hear your feedback on it etc,I took my time with this one and I think the result was worth it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kUdo5UnYgeQ


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Cosmin Lupu
post Feb 19 2013, 09:08 AM
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Awesome riffing and tight feel! The tone is very good, but the theme entering at 0:56 is a bit too loud in the mix and I'd also focus a bit on those notes that feel out of pitch a bit, especially towards the end of the solo.

As usual, your riffing is totally great!

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post Feb 19 2013, 09:15 AM
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The riffing is really tight. And I like the way you think, rather simple ideas but very powerful result! cool.gif
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post Feb 19 2013, 07:27 PM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Feb 19 2013, 08:08 AM) *
Awesome riffing and tight feel! The tone is very good, but the theme entering at 0:56 is a bit too loud in the mix and I'd also focus a bit on those notes that feel out of pitch a bit, especially towards the end of the solo.

As usual, your riffing is totally great!

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Thanks cosmin! Yeah I noticed that now haha weird how i didn't catch it before.


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post Feb 20 2013, 07:09 AM
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Good riffing! As cos mentioned, there are few sour notes in the solo at the end and the mix could use perhaps a limiter on the master bus to even things out or a remix with finer detail per track ( keep an eye on your master level) but your recordings and playing are getting better each time keep it up!!


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QUOTE (enlo22 @ Feb 19 2013, 12:51 AM) *
Ok guys, this is a new track I came up with. I'm actually happy with it. I would like to hear your feedback on it etc,I took my time with this one and I think the result was worth it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kUdo5UnYgeQ



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Cosmin Lupu
post Feb 20 2013, 08:48 AM
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QUOTE (enlo22 @ Feb 19 2013, 06:27 PM) *
Thanks cosmin! Yeah I noticed that now haha weird how i didn't catch it before.


No worries mate - just be careful in the future regarding the pitches and the volume of your leads in the mix smile.gif Looking forward to see more videos from you - I am a big fan of your riffing!


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post Feb 20 2013, 11:50 AM
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Really cool man!


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post Feb 21 2013, 09:25 AM
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QUOTE (enlo22 @ Feb 19 2013, 06:51 AM) *
Ok guys, this is a new track I came up with. I'm actually happy with it. I would like to hear your feedback on it etc,I took my time with this one and I think the result was worth it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kUdo5UnYgeQ



Great heavy riffage man, congrats! Todd and Cosmin have already spoken about the mix and about a few sour tones, so I just wanted to add that you seem to have your vision and focus - there comes a really determined vibe from your playing, both musically and visually, so keep it up!


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post Feb 21 2013, 12:01 PM
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There are some really killer riffs there and your playing is so tight! The solo is also good and well played. The only thing that I would like to find here is a more melodic/catchy part, something like a chorus that could be memorable! But well, it's just my opinion. wink.gif
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post Feb 23 2013, 11:11 PM
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Thanks for the comments, i've been working on the soloing a bit trying to make it more clean to my older ones. I just get lost at times, but I don't wanna just repeat the same thing over and over! i need new ideas.


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post Feb 24 2013, 01:01 PM
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QUOTE (enlo22 @ Feb 23 2013, 10:11 PM) *
Thanks for the comments, i've been working on the soloing a bit trying to make it more clean to my older ones. I just get lost at times, but I don't wanna just repeat the same thing over and over! i need new ideas.


One thing that you could do - maybe you tried it already? - is sing the solos first smile.gif You know, the stuff you hear in your head is always fresh and unlike anything you ever did before. Put the track on repeat - or just a certain part of it - and sing various themes that you can develop afterwards using all your soloing skills. This is how I do it and it always turns out nice smile.gif Let me know if you try it and if you do and record, show us all biggrin.gif


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