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Sensible Jones
post Apr 16 2013, 11:12 PM
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QUOTE (Darius Wave @ Apr 16 2013, 09:11 AM) *
gregc1 Thank You for your detailed opinion. Very pleasant to read smile.gif Sensibile Jones...ok...so waiting for Your message smile.gif

Ok mate, will message you tomorrow with the passage times!
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Todd Simpson
post Apr 17 2013, 12:28 AM
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Really great work on this one!!! Nice job everyone and great way to start off DARIUS!!!


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QUOTE (Darius Wave @ Apr 14 2013, 06:23 PM) *
Thank You all for Your solos. They all gave some really cool mood to the track. Also...they were different, so after setting up a good order the tension build of whole thing came pretty nice smile.gif I've promised to do this at the weekend time...well. For me it's still Sunday night...so I feel like I've made it smile.gif All of You seems to have nice melody and feel...also some great guitar tone in there. If You don't mind I would like to post here my indyvidual thoughts about each solos...but to be fair I'll do this in time...writting all for everyone at the moment is no objective as it should be. But keep in mind...those are only little suggestions smile.gif


Order of apearance:

1. Darius Wave
2. tonyk
3. AK Rich
4. gregc1
5. Patrik Berg
6. Sensibile Jones
7. Hungry4Heaven

https://soundcloud.com/dariuswave/guitarmasterclass-net-poor

Download : [attachment=31519:poor_pup...llab_mix.mp3]

I really enjoyd this one so keep in touch...We're gonna do next one smile.gif



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Darius Wave
post Apr 30 2013, 02:45 PM
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QUOTE (Todd Simpson @ Apr 17 2013, 12:28 AM) *
Really great work on this one!!! Nice job everyone and great way to start off DARIUS!!!


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Thank You Todd! smile.gif If You have a while I would like to invite You to my new "Broken Egg" Collaboration...How about it?smile.gif


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post May 1 2013, 07:49 PM
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Nice work everybody


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Darius Wave
post May 4 2013, 12:58 PM
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Ok i promised to do a very short summary for every player so here we go smile.gif

As a first Thank You everybody for joining the poor puppy collaboration. You all did an awesome job. Most of You were supported just after uploading the first take so most of You had Your flaws pointed in the post right after. Thank You for making corrections and redoing the takes so the final mix could sound awesome! smile.gif

There are only few little things I could add:

1. Darius Wave - You bloody bastard Your guitar is out of tune and the tone sucks....You need to work on Your timming and spend much more hours on making this fit to the backing track ......tongue.gif

2. Tonyk - I think You could work on Your tone. It sounds pretty like guitar plugged directly to the lin-in without any cab sim. I've added some eq but We need to work on this to be good at the recording point. You can also try to work on dynamics next time. Clean tone needs some special attention. I think this kind of track need softer playing to get a little warmer tone directly from the guitar and avoid the strings hitting the frets. Anyway Your sense of melody is good and You gave a very useful piece to this song smile.gif

3. AK Rich - Very nice feeling and concept for this track. I think You could consider similar thing as tonyk ...I would Use a bit softer picking to avoid the pick scraping the string too much smile.gif It might be also a matter of tone adjustment. Unpleasant frequencies are between 2 and 6 kHz. Jus a little tip to improve You tone


4. gregc1 - Not too much to add. Like Your tone even though as for My private preferences I would remove a bit of "nose" middle frequencies smile.gif Great playing and dynamics control!


5. Patrik Berg - beautiful harmonies smile.gif Like Your concept for this track. Tone is clear but a bit too scooped for my tase. I would add some more warm mid freq like 500-800 Hz.

6. Sensibile Jones - nice tone and Your bluesy feel smile.gif

7. Hungry4Heaven - nice warm tone and cool little ornaments plus some nice triples in there. Cool pinch harmonics and a tremolo down finish smile.gif

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Minks
post May 5 2013, 12:54 AM
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nice job guys, really impressive stuff!
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