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post Sep 22 2013, 10:42 AM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Aug 10 2013, 09:17 AM) *
Hey Arthur - I am here, man smile.gif Come back when you think you are ready to start things again smile.gif


Hey Cosmin,

It's been a long time!
I admit I have not taken time to practice. Just because I don't feel like. And there were holidays. And it's been a key time in my work, my emotional life, spiritual life, ahahah... Much in a row to handle smile.gif
I have less time to dedicate to guitar, and I spend it playing just for fun or composing. I have played some acoustics too.
Maybe I practiced too much, and it kind of bored me too. But it has always been like that, It is kind of periodical, there are months where I practice a lot, and then I pause, and then I practice again... It's my way tongue.gif

However, I would love to get your feedback on some compositions I have made lately. I composed a song these last few days, that would be great if you could give me your feedback on it.
Here it is: https://www.dropbox.com/s/971injabpfhdqc6/c...%202109%205.mp3

Don't hesitate to criticize. It's a draft, so don't judge the quality of recording or mixing and so on... Only focus on the composition in itself.

EDIT: the link

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post Sep 23 2013, 09:26 AM
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Hey mate - welcome back smile.gif

I think that this is definitely a huge step forward and I think you did a great job. I also commented in the other thread where you posted it, so now, a few questions arise:

- will it be an instrumental tune only?
- will it have any vocals?
- is this the final structure?

I also liked those leads I heard there in the conversation you had with Vince!

At this point, it sounds pretty much interesting and it doesn't leave me feeling like it misses something smile.gif



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post Sep 23 2013, 09:37 AM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Sep 23 2013, 10:26 AM) *
Hey mate - welcome back smile.gif

I think that this is definitely a huge step forward and I think you did a great job. I also commented in the other thread where you posted it, so now, a few questions arise:

- will it be an instrumental tune only?
- will it have any vocals?
- is this the final structure?

I also liked those leads I heard there in the conversation you had with Vince!

At this point, it sounds pretty much interesting and it doesn't leave me feeling like it misses something smile.gif


Hey Cosmin,

I saw your post. Thank you for helping I appreciate!
Indeed, I really start making composition I actually like, which is really motivating smile.gif

I don't know, I think it will be instrumental.
But I have a friend of mine (a girl) who could be interested... I have to see with her.

No, the structure is not the final one. I made it two days ago, but it is very opened to modifications. I have to take a global view of the whole song, and adjust some things.
I will take all of your (you and the other GMC guys) advice in consideration, and be happy to make it better!

I will wait some days, and start working again on it so that I have a fresh look at it!

I keep you informed!

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post Sep 24 2013, 10:22 AM
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Hey Arthur! Would you prefer that I post the video in which I want to talk about the moods of the song, in here or in the other thread? smile.gif


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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Sep 24 2013, 11:22 AM) *
Hey Arthur! Would you prefer that I post the video in which I want to talk about the moods of the song, in here or in the other thread? smile.gif


Post it on the other thread, so that everyone can access it, I see no objection !

Thank you !

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Alrightie! smile.gif Here ya go - I'll also post it in the other thread:



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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Sep 24 2013, 12:16 PM) *
Alrightie! smile.gif Here ya go - I'll also post it in the other thread:



Hello buddy!

Sorry, I didn't see taht you posted the video.
I just lokked at it, and I think that it is a good idea. I am gonna try and implement that sort of thing into the song, and try to make a lead more present and that gives a direction to the song!

I keep you informed!

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Hey mate smile.gif No worries - glad ya found it - just keep me posted and we'll see what direction your song will take wink.gif


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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Oct 5 2013, 12:41 PM) *
Hey mate smile.gif No worries - glad ya found it - just keep me posted and we'll see what direction your song will take wink.gif


Hey Cosmin,

I've just submitted a new post, requesting some feedback on a new composition, in practice room. I'd like to have yours!

I didn't manage to bring the last composition what was missing. And there are so many ideas flowing in my mind!!!
I just put it aside for the moment, and maybe later I'll have fresh ideas for it!

But there is my first composition non-metal, and I like the atmosphere, the harmony. It is very weird, but I like it !
I am looking forward to hear your thougths about it!

See you bro

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QUOTE (Unleech @ Oct 28 2013, 01:10 PM) *
Hey Cosmin,

I've just submitted a new post, requesting some feedback on a new composition, in practice room. I'd like to have yours!

I didn't manage to bring the last composition what was missing. And there are so many ideas flowing in my mind!!!
I just put it aside for the moment, and maybe later I'll have fresh ideas for it!

But there is my first composition non-metal, and I like the atmosphere, the harmony. It is very weird, but I like it !
I am looking forward to hear your thougths about it!

See you bro



Hey Arthur! Right on it man smile.gif I think you did a very, very good job, mate! Here are my thoughts:

https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_fo...st&p=663824


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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Oct 29 2013, 10:44 AM) *
Hey Arthur! Right on it man smile.gif I think you did a very, very good job, mate! Here are my thoughts:

https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_fo...st&p=663824


I updated the song, you can check it up !
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Hey mate - love it! The only thing that I'd ponder upon would be that last part with the distorted guitar - seems to sit a bit out of the mix somehow. Maybe it should be a bit more in the back?


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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Oct 31 2013, 08:03 PM) *
Hey mate - love it! The only thing that I'd ponder upon would be that last part with the distorted guitar - seems to sit a bit out of the mix somehow. Maybe it should be a bit more in the back?


Yeah sure, I didn't mix it in fact, I roughly adjusted the volumes, that's all. I am finishing to make the structure fine, then I will adjust drums and synths and bass and have the mix done by a friend of mine.
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QUOTE (Unleech @ Oct 31 2013, 06:39 PM) *
Yeah sure, I didn't mix it in fact, I roughly adjusted the volumes, that's all. I am finishing to make the structure fine, then I will adjust drums and synths and bass and have the mix done by a friend of mine.


Ah! Alright! Keep me posted then, mate wink.gif


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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Nov 1 2013, 07:30 PM) *
Ah! Alright! Keep me posted then, mate wink.gif


new one posted.
I think I am close to the final version concerning the structure.
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Wow biggrin.gif Love the solo mate - sounds very layered and well structured, just like a question and answer sort of thing!


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