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> Take 4: Iron Maiden Style Lesson 2, Lesson By Gabriel Leopardi
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post Jul 17 2013, 06:20 AM
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Original lesson: Iron Maiden Style Lesson 2 by Gabriel Leopardi

hi. i took a long break from this lesson, i think this may be take 5. started a new you tube and deleted everything off my old account. i did this cause my personal info was on old one and i signed up new with none of that info. im wierd like that. never liked social media, i have all my old takes on my hard drive. im about to post alot of old rec takes, should i put them in the forum for a way to compare new takes to old?

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Darius Wave
post Jul 17 2013, 08:14 AM
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Very good work Dave! I hear some tiny things to take a close look at...like the 0:15 this vibrato with the first finger. Maybe try to make it with the wrist - You can see on the Gabe's lesson - He does it with the wrist. You will then add the fulness and smoothness to this one smile.gif Now it's a bit distracting. I would also foucs more on th trills in the 17th and 18th bar (according to the tabs). I mean the moment You hit the string after changing each position should be more synchronized to the drum beats smile.gif

In my opinion those are just a few details and aside from them it's an excellent take smile.gif

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Cosmin Lupu
post Jul 17 2013, 12:01 PM
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Hey mate! Darius spotted the exact things that I noticed - the only ones that require your attention, for this take to be perfect!

Congrats for being such a consistent dude!


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Gabriel Leopardi
post Jul 17 2013, 01:58 PM
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Ok mate! To summarize what Cosmin y Darius said, the main point to fix are bending (you don't reach the correct pitch always, and for any reason you lose a bit the tempo when it's moment for a bend) and timing in some phrases. You are getting very closer. Keep on the good job!

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