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Unleech
post Sep 23 2013, 09:13 AM
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I too like the idea of puzzle riffs - reminds me of Meshuggah with a different stint, given by the lead parts - I really like the beginning leads - the thematic part and that tremolo part, but towards the middle, it tends to lose a bit of direction somewhat... I think that the leads should also sound more thematic and 'mechanized' if I may use such a word to describe the feeling - just like the ones in the beginning - they fit the scenery perfectly, in my opinion! This smells like a great job mate, keep at it and let's see a full song smile.gif


Thank you for your feedback Cosmin!

Could you define "middle"? And explain me in more detail the 'mechanized' term you use?
I can try and put more lead into the song, based on the beginning one. By the way I like the atmosphere it creates, and it could be a good idea. I could try and elaborate it, based on that initial harmony.

Concerning the "middle" losing a bit a direction, I somewhat agree with you and already noticed it. I need to have a more overall look at the whole song, and modify some parts and maybe add more unique one so that the direction is more clear.

Thanks for your help, I will keep working smile.gif
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Cosmin Lupu
post Sep 24 2013, 10:14 AM
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QUOTE (Unleech @ Sep 23 2013, 08:13 AM) *
Thank you for your feedback Cosmin!

Could you define "middle"? And explain me in more detail the 'mechanized' term you use?
I can try and put more lead into the song, based on the beginning one. By the way I like the atmosphere it creates, and it could be a good idea. I could try and elaborate it, based on that initial harmony.

Concerning the "middle" losing a bit a direction, I somewhat agree with you and already noticed it. I need to have a more overall look at the whole song, and modify some parts and maybe add more unique one so that the direction is more clear.

Thanks for your help, I will keep working smile.gif


It's easier to talk about it so, expect a video wink.gif


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