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> Heavy Ballad C# Minor, Lesson By Jonathan Burgos
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post Sep 25 2013, 04:26 AM
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Original lesson: Heavy Ballad C# Minor by Jonathan Burgos

I know it's not a good take but I want to get your advice and track my progress in the next weeks.



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Cosmin Lupu
post Sep 25 2013, 10:13 AM
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Hey again mate!

I think that as an overall, this take is very good, but you should focus on the following to make it perfect:

- the phrasing is a bit too rigid - it is technically correct but it doesn't flow - this needs time and focusing on interpretation
- the faster licks are just a bit blurry and you should isolate them and practice them slower until you get them right - 01:22 - it's just a matter of finesse, as I see it here wink.gif

Keep rocking mate!

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Gabriel Leopardi
post Sep 25 2013, 02:38 PM
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Hi mate! Good job on this one! I fully agree with Cosmin comments, you still have to continue playing this one to get a smoother playing and also isolate those fast licks near the end and practice over metronome as technique exercises.

Keep on the hard work!


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Darius Wave
post Sep 25 2013, 03:55 PM
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You're too cruel for Yourself smile.gif Your take isn't bad at all smile.gif I will even say it's pretty nice. Aside form what has been said - Your bends seems to be better. It sound like You took a bit of time to focus on those and this is very good smile.gif Aside from just a few moments the tuning is very nice and tone match also. For my private taste I would go a bit down with the distortion to keep better attack and less blurryness on the palm muting smile.gif Great job! smile.gif


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post Sep 26 2013, 08:33 PM
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