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Gitarrero
post Nov 5 2013, 08:01 PM
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Hey guys,

I finally did it and recorded an original song with vocals.
A little fun-punk tune, and I even mention the GMC chat in the song!

It was all written and recorded on sunday and it's pretty much a one-take, meaning I recorded every take once and since I liked the result, I didn't polish anything smile.gif

Check it on soundcloud, or if you rather see me in action, watch das Video!

https://soundcloud.com/gitarrero/too-young



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post Nov 5 2013, 08:47 PM
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HA! very cool, lyrics are ace biggrin.gif
kinda got a ' less than jake', 'me first' type of a groove to it, excellent stuff dude.


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post Nov 5 2013, 11:08 PM
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Very nice tune man!! Congrats!

The question is, does the girl who is to you for you already heard the song?


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post Nov 5 2013, 11:17 PM
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Super congrats man!!! Well played and well sung smile.gif I think you should start a ONE MAN PUNK BAND!!!!

QUOTE (Gitarrero @ Nov 5 2013, 03:01 PM) *
Hey guys,

I finally did it and recorded an original song with vocals.
A little fun-punk tune, and I even mention the GMC chat in the song!

It was all written and recorded on sunday and it's pretty much a one-take, meaning I recorded every take once and since I liked the result, I didn't polish anything smile.gif

Check it on soundcloud, or if you rather see me in action, watch das Video!

https://soundcloud.com/gitarrero/too-young




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post Nov 6 2013, 08:52 AM
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Das Hef! Du bis genial! biggrin.gif AS I said on Facebook, I really enjoyed the lyrics but as I said, maybe you should've played around with the key a bit so that you would feel more in a comfort zone wink.gif


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post Nov 6 2013, 09:04 AM
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You did it biggrin.gif

Great work Christian, like it a lot!
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post Nov 12 2013, 07:12 PM
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Thanks a lot for the feedback guys biggrin.gif

To answer coffeemans question: yes, she heard it first and said it was ok to show it to "your guitar lunatics" (end of quote).
She actually thought it was a funny song and mentioned: "so...you complained about Taylor Swift but now wrote a song about your Ex as well?"...can't argue with that, she has a point there.


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post Nov 13 2013, 11:01 AM
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QUOTE (Gitarrero @ Nov 12 2013, 06:12 PM) *
Thanks a lot for the feedback guys biggrin.gif

To answer coffeemans question: yes, she heard it first and said it was ok to show it to "your guitar lunatics" (end of quote).
She actually thought it was a funny song and mentioned: "so...you complained about Taylor Swift but now wrote a song about your Ex as well?"...can't argue with that, she has a point there.


Writing funny lyrics full of meaning and word games is an absolute art! I totally recommend you to check out Freak Kitchen - Mattias Eklundh's band, as he is as funny and inspirational in lyrics as he is in his guitar playing wink.gif


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post Nov 13 2013, 04:17 PM
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It's good that you haven't forgot to mention Gmc chat - which indeed, is institution itself ! cool.gif
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post Nov 14 2013, 03:24 PM
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Ha ha ha! What a cool playing! biggrin.gif PErfect soundtrack for another american teenage movie biggrin.gif


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post Nov 14 2013, 03:45 PM
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hahahah cool song mate! I really like it, it's catchy and funny. Could you please post the lyrics here? I understand most of it but I would like to check some parts. smile.gif


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post Nov 15 2013, 08:46 AM
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Right! Give us the lyrics mate and if you have more, why not share them here? I think you have a great talent for funny and smart lyrics biggrin.gif


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post Dec 1 2013, 01:18 PM
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Whoops, I still owe you the lyrics!
By the way, new stuff is in the making wink.gif

Too young

When we first met I knew that you were the one,
even you and my hamster got along.
You looked like a rockchick and you had tattoos
but after a few weeks all hell broke lose!

Dancing in the club to David Guetta
you love One Direction cause no band rocks better
Justin Bieber, all that stuff,
girl I've really had enough!
Taylor Swift and Selena Gomez
Miley Cyrus all night long...
you know I really hate to say it
but you're too young for me!

I thought I could take it and simpyl don't care
but that was before I got aware
you don't wanted me to eat meat anymore
and I though all vegans loved metalcore!

Dancing in the club to David Guetta
you love One Direction cause no band rocks better
Justin Bieber, all that stuff,
girl I've really had enough!
Taylor Swift and Selena Gomez
Miley Cyrus all night long...
you know I really hate to say it
but you're too young for me!

Lying on the couch watching SyFy or Football,
look at all those books I haven't read them all,
don't wanna go dancing cause my back hurts so bad,
spend my saturdays at the GMC chat.
Come on baby get a clue
this is what I love to do!
You know I really hate to say it...
but I'm too old for you.


Like I said, a new song is in the making, title "happy couples" wink.gif


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post Dec 1 2013, 01:49 PM
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hehe good one!!!
i'll buy the CD!!



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post Dec 1 2013, 02:02 PM
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I can't believe I missed this masterpiece! smile.gif

Love the music and especially lyrics - this turned out so cool, you should make and record more songs!


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post Dec 1 2013, 02:32 PM
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Well done biggrin.gif hahah love it.


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post Dec 17 2013, 12:35 PM
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QUOTE (Gitarrero @ Dec 1 2013, 12:18 PM) *
Whoops, I still owe you the lyrics!
By the way, new stuff is in the making wink.gif

Too young

When we first met I knew that you were the one,
even you and my hamster got along.
You looked like a rockchick and you had tattoos
but after a few weeks all hell broke lose!

Dancing in the club to David Guetta
you love One Direction cause no band rocks better
Justin Bieber, all that stuff,
girl I've really had enough!
Taylor Swift and Selena Gomez
Miley Cyrus all night long...
you know I really hate to say it
but you're too young for me!

I thought I could take it and simpyl don't care
but that was before I got aware
you don't wanted me to eat meat anymore
and I though all vegans loved metalcore!

Dancing in the club to David Guetta
you love One Direction cause no band rocks better
Justin Bieber, all that stuff,
girl I've really had enough!
Taylor Swift and Selena Gomez
Miley Cyrus all night long...
you know I really hate to say it
but you're too young for me!

Lying on the couch watching SyFy or Football,
look at all those books I haven't read them all,
don't wanna go dancing cause my back hurts so bad,
spend my saturdays at the GMC chat.
Come on baby get a clue
this is what I love to do!
You know I really hate to say it...
but I'm too old for you.


Like I said, a new song is in the making, title "happy couples" wink.gif


I'll definitely get the CD when it comes out! Great lyrics man - you really have a thing for this! Keep going!


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