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post Dec 11 2013, 09:08 AM
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wanted to try some metal this time so hope you like laugh.gif

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Gabriel Leopardi
post Dec 12 2013, 01:48 AM
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Hi mate. This is a very interesting track. I find the first section, until 01:14 very fresh based on the songs that you usually compose. That parts needs more precision in timing to be more effective. Then the song becomes more melodic, I like the atmosphere, but I would go for even catchier melodies there. Just my opinion. It's a nice tune. Part 3 (starting at 02:14) is also cool, I think that the palm muted rhythm add something new and outstanding to the track.

So well done, keep on composing nice music.


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post Dec 12 2013, 05:50 PM
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Thanks , I also needed to adjust the volume of the drums on this track because listening to this tune in the car I found the drums were really soft lol should be fixed now

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post Dec 12 2013, 07:44 PM
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QUOTE (Vulpine @ Dec 12 2013, 01:50 PM) *
Thanks , I also needed to adjust the volume of the drums on this track because listening to this tune in the car I found the drums were really soft lol should be fixed now

http://markway16.bandcamp.com/album/6-a-m-ep



It sounds more balanced now. I can't really note the bass in the track. Did you record one?


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post Dec 12 2013, 08:53 PM
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Gab's managed to echo my own opinions smile.gif

It's got promise.. your ideas are always original, never cliche.. which is a really good thing.


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post Dec 17 2013, 03:01 PM
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That theme in the beginning got me hooked instantly! Great work mate as with all your compositions especially now that your rhythm is getting better!


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post Dec 18 2013, 06:12 PM
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Hey I really appreciate the feedback from all you guys this was most likely my last song for this year = ) I want to try and do a demonstration/live version of this ... something I havent done in a while with any of my tunes so hopefully I may be able to do that by next week sometime
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post Dec 19 2013, 09:07 AM
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QUOTE (Vulpine @ Dec 18 2013, 05:12 PM) *
Hey I really appreciate the feedback from all you guys this was most likely my last song for this year = ) I want to try and do a demonstration/live version of this ... something I havent done in a while with any of my tunes so hopefully I may be able to do that by next week sometime


Live versions would be great smile.gif I remember the pleasant surprise that I had when I saw that video you posted with the improvisation over the Staind track. That was very, very good!


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