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Alisson da Silva
post Jan 2 2014, 09:26 PM
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Hey guys! Here's what I'm working on. What do you guys think about the tone? It's my second time recording , so I'm not really sure if it's good or not.

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Darius Wave
post Jan 2 2014, 09:48 PM
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QUOTE (Alisson da Silva @ Jan 2 2014, 09:26 PM) *
Hey guys! Here's what I'm working on. What do you guys think about the tone? It's my second time recording , so I'm not really sure if it's good or not.


Now that was nice! Thanx for the take. I like that crunchy drive You use there smile.gif Also some simple yet very fine phrasing concepts for that track smile.gif


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Cosmin Lupu
post Jan 3 2014, 09:17 AM
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QUOTE (Alisson da Silva @ Jan 2 2014, 08:26 PM) *
Hey guys! Here's what I'm working on. What do you guys think about the tone? It's my second time recording , so I'm not really sure if it's good or not.


Hey Alisson - I agree with Darius on his ideas and I like the 'question/answer' approach. The only thing you could work on, would be to make the phrasing sound a bit more fluid - that doesn't mean you have to change anything in terms of composition, but practice it more and record when you can play it fluidly and with a lot of feel wink.gif keep rocking!


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Alisson da Silva
post Jan 5 2014, 12:53 AM
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QUOTE (Darius Wave @ Jan 2 2014, 09:48 PM) *
Now that was nice! Thanx for the take. I like that crunchy drive You use there smile.gif Also some simple yet very fine phrasing concepts for that track smile.gif


Thank you Darius . I'm glad you liked it smile.gif

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Hey Alisson - I agree with Darius on his ideas and I like the 'question/answer' approach. The only thing you could work on, would be to make the phrasing sound a bit more fluid - that doesn't mean you have to change anything in terms of composition, but practice it more and record when you can play it fluidly and with a lot of feel wink.gif keep rocking!

Hey Cosmin! Thanks man , I'm practicing it and I'll record it again when I decide to make the video. smile.gif
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Cosmin Lupu
post Jan 5 2014, 12:31 PM
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QUOTE (Alisson da Silva @ Jan 4 2014, 11:53 PM) *
Hey Cosmin! Thanks man , I'm practicing it and I'll record it again when I decide to make the video. smile.gif


That sounds like a great plan Alisson! In general, your ideas are good and musical, but you need to perfect them before recording to get the most out of your playing, deal? smile.gif


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post Jan 6 2014, 05:49 PM
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Who else is planning to enter this collab? smile.gif


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post Jan 6 2014, 09:54 PM
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Just a qucik reminder smile.gif Some of You already did this but all of You can count on our support. If You have any idea and would like to get some tips You can send us private messages or just post the primary take here for a feedback. Remember - we're not a YT. No one will troll You here - only constructive feedback for Your own good smile.gif


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post Jan 7 2014, 08:37 AM
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Darius is right smile.gif If you feel like entering the collab but in the same time, you fear that your take 'might not be good enough' you are dead wrong smile.gif Send any of us a PM or post the question or idea here. We will help out in demonstrating that there's beauty in every idea, as long as we learn how to exploit it properly.


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post Jan 7 2014, 04:47 PM
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What a surprise! I don't know why I didn't see this...?!
Wonderful music ideas, guys!
Oh, and I'm honored. It's always cool to hear my BT's with your amazing solos smile.gif
P.S. I'm just working on "Winter tune II" and this collab will be a great inspiration in making this lesson.


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post Jan 7 2014, 04:52 PM
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QUOTE (Opetholic @ Dec 24 2013, 11:02 PM) *
Oh man, what an epic backing track you guys chose for this collab.. This is one of my most favorite lessons at GMC.. I would love to join, only I don't know if I could possibly do any justice to the wonderful backing..



I agree... what an epic backing track .. I think I might attend this one biggrin.gif
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post Jan 7 2014, 06:46 PM
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QUOTE (Piotr Kaczor @ Jan 7 2014, 04:47 PM) *
What a surprise! I don't know why I didn't see this...?!
Wonderful music ideas, guys!
Oh, and I'm honored. It's always cool to hear my BT's with your amazing solos smile.gif
P.S. I'm just working on "Winter tune II" and this collab will be a great inspiration in making this lesson.

ha ha ha ! so You did find out so late ?biggrin.gif No surprise Your lesson is a best seller here biggrin.gif


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post Jan 7 2014, 08:01 PM
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I've been improvising over a small section of this beautiful tune..would like a little feedback from anyone...cheers: need refining!! laugh.gif
I made a couple of short Wav files...hope thats right... First try at collab so be honest with criticisms...I can take it!!

Attached File  Winter_collab.wav ( 4.04MB ) Number of downloads: 158


Attached File  Winter_collab_2.wav ( 4.54MB ) Number of downloads: 240


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post Jan 7 2014, 10:59 PM
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QUOTE (Headbanger @ Jan 7 2014, 07:01 PM) *
I've been improvising over a small section of this beautiful tune..would like a little feedback from anyone...cheers: need refining!! laugh.gif
I made a couple of short Wav files...hope thats right... First try at collab so be honest with criticisms...I can take it!!

Attached File  Winter_collab.wav ( 4.04MB ) Number of downloads: 158


Attached File  Winter_collab_2.wav ( 4.54MB ) Number of downloads: 240

you're no doubt better off getting advice from a better player than me.... but... listening to both parts a few times, I thought its sounding good.
I especially liked the second one. Youve got a really cool release on 0.12, I really liked the note you landed on and the bends immediately after were very nice indeed smile.gif Im not sure of the correct terms but you get a cool 'snap' to them.
sounds good, carry on sir smile.gif



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post Jan 8 2014, 04:32 AM
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QUOTE (Headbanger @ Jan 7 2014, 07:01 PM) *
I've been improvising over a small section of this beautiful tune..would like a little feedback from anyone...cheers: need refining!! laugh.gif
I made a couple of short Wav files...hope thats right... First try at collab so be honest with criticisms...I can take it!!

Attached File  Winter_collab.wav ( 4.04MB ) Number of downloads: 158


Attached File  Winter_collab_2.wav ( 4.54MB ) Number of downloads: 240


Sounds like you got something good cooking. smile.gif The :16 second solo sounded good playing wise but felt it could used one more lick at the end to close it out…. like you did with the :18 imrpov.


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post Jan 8 2014, 05:03 AM
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I've been working out this solo for a couple days. I loaned out my camera so I'll have to shoot the video later!

I'd be curious to know what you think of the guitar tone here? I'm working with a new mic (sm57) and been working on improving my recordings. I still need to purchase a good set of monitors to give myself better judgement.

https://soundcloud.com/degroot-2/winter-collab


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post Jan 8 2014, 09:19 AM
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QUOTE (DeGroot @ Jan 8 2014, 04:03 AM) *
I've been working out this solo for a couple days. I loaned out my camera so I'll have to shoot the video later!

I'd be curious to know what you think of the guitar tone here? I'm working with a new mic (sm57) and been working on improving my recordings. I still need to purchase a good set of monitors to give myself better judgement.

https://soundcloud.com/degroot-2/winter-collab


oooh, that sounds very tasty dude. I like the tone, the playing aint too bad either cool.gif


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post Jan 8 2014, 09:57 AM
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QUOTE (DeGroot @ Jan 8 2014, 04:03 AM) *
I've been working out this solo for a couple days. I loaned out my camera so I'll have to shoot the video later!

I'd be curious to know what you think of the guitar tone here? I'm working with a new mic (sm57) and been working on improving my recordings. I still need to purchase a good set of monitors to give myself better judgement.

https://soundcloud.com/degroot-2/winter-collab


Excellent take man smile.gif If you are to ask me, the playing can stay like this! Dynamics, melody and technique! About the tone - it has something of the tone you had so far but also a different edge, maybe I am lead by the open string lick you did? I am a fan of those smile.gif

QUOTE (Headbanger @ Jan 7 2014, 07:01 PM) *
I've been improvising over a small section of this beautiful tune..would like a little feedback from anyone...cheers: need refining!! laugh.gif
I made a couple of short Wav files...hope thats right... First try at collab so be honest with criticisms...I can take it!!

Attached File  Winter_collab.wav ( 4.04MB ) Number of downloads: 158


Attached File  Winter_collab_2.wav ( 4.54MB ) Number of downloads: 240


Howdy mate smile.gif I like the tone and your articulation is almost there (some notes would require a bit more attention so that they may reach the intended pitch) but the general thing that you need to work on would be direction. The playing needs to head somewhere and that is obtained by working with a clear rhythmic path in combination with the note choice. The licks you used are good, but they are staying instead of leading to a direction. Try to tie them up and we'll take it from there smile.gif


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post Jan 8 2014, 10:08 AM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Jan 8 2014, 09:57 AM) *
Howdy mate smile.gif I like the tone and your articulation is almost there (some notes would require a bit more attention so that they may reach the intended pitch) but the general thing that you need to work on would be direction. The playing needs to head somewhere and that is obtained by working with a clear rhythmic path in combination with the note choice. The licks you used are good, but they are staying instead of leading to a direction. Try to tie them up and we'll take it from there smile.gif


Thanks Bleez, DeGroot and Cosmin. I'll take all of this into consideration and see if I can lead into more direction rather than 'staying'...I usually work on all the collabs although never post as they never seem right. I'd describe myself as an improvisor rather than a learner of lead lines..maybe that's my problem. This years resolution is to try and post a bit of music rather than hide...I'll do some more impro and hopefully get something better together! smile.gif


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post Jan 8 2014, 01:30 PM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Jan 8 2014, 08:57 AM) *
Excellent take man smile.gif If you are to ask me, the playing can stay like this! Dynamics, melody and technique! About the tone - it has something of the tone you had so far but also a different edge, maybe I am lead by the open string lick you did? I am a fan of those smile.gif


Thanks Cosmin smile.gif I suppose it isn't a drastic tone change since I'm only changing the mic... It is still the same amp and guitar as I normally use. I will keep this take and send you guys video soon!


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oooh, that sounds very tasty dude. I like the tone, the playing aint too bad either cool.gif


Thanks Bleez, appreciate it! Look forward to hearing your take


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post Jan 8 2014, 01:34 PM
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QUOTE (DeGroot @ Jan 8 2014, 05:03 AM) *
I've been working out this solo for a couple days. I loaned out my camera so I'll have to shoot the video later!

I'd be curious to know what you think of the guitar tone here? I'm working with a new mic (sm57) and been working on improving my recordings. I still need to purchase a good set of monitors to give myself better judgement.

https://soundcloud.com/degroot-2/winter-collab


Nice work Degroot...I'm gonna have a job getting near this standard!! laugh.gif


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