Smells Like Winter Video Collab, Instructor/students Video Collaboration |
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Smells Like Winter Video Collab, Instructor/students Video Collaboration |
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Jan 2 2014, 09:26 PM |
Hey guys! Here's what I'm working on. What do you guys think about the tone? It's my second time recording , so I'm not really sure if it's good or not.
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Jan 6 2014, 05:49 PM |
Who else is planning to enter this collab?
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Jan 7 2014, 08:01 PM |
I've been improvising over a small section of this beautiful tune..would like a little feedback from anyone...cheers: need refining!!
I made a couple of short Wav files...hope thats right... First try at collab so be honest with criticisms...I can take it!! Winter_collab.wav ( 4.04MB ) Number of downloads: 238 Winter_collab_2.wav ( 4.54MB ) Number of downloads: 325 |
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Jan 7 2014, 10:59 PM |
I've been improvising over a small section of this beautiful tune..would like a little feedback from anyone...cheers: need refining!! I made a couple of short Wav files...hope thats right... First try at collab so be honest with criticisms...I can take it!! Winter_collab.wav ( 4.04MB ) Number of downloads: 238 Winter_collab_2.wav ( 4.54MB ) Number of downloads: 325 you're no doubt better off getting advice from a better player than me.... but... listening to both parts a few times, I thought its sounding good. I especially liked the second one. Youve got a really cool release on 0.12, I really liked the note you landed on and the bends immediately after were very nice indeed Im not sure of the correct terms but you get a cool 'snap' to them. sounds good, carry on sir -------------------- You say 'minor pentatonic ' like it's a bad thing |
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Jan 8 2014, 04:32 AM |
I've been improvising over a small section of this beautiful tune..would like a little feedback from anyone...cheers: need refining!! I made a couple of short Wav files...hope thats right... First try at collab so be honest with criticisms...I can take it!! Winter_collab.wav ( 4.04MB ) Number of downloads: 238 Winter_collab_2.wav ( 4.54MB ) Number of downloads: 325 Sounds like you got something good cooking. The :16 second solo sounded good playing wise but felt it could used one more lick at the end to close it out…. like you did with the :18 imrpov. -------------------- |
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Jan 8 2014, 05:03 AM |
I've been working out this solo for a couple days. I loaned out my camera so I'll have to shoot the video later!
I'd be curious to know what you think of the guitar tone here? I'm working with a new mic (sm57) and been working on improving my recordings. I still need to purchase a good set of monitors to give myself better judgement. https://soundcloud.com/degroot-2/winter-collab -------------------- |
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Jan 8 2014, 09:19 AM |
I've been working out this solo for a couple days. I loaned out my camera so I'll have to shoot the video later! I'd be curious to know what you think of the guitar tone here? I'm working with a new mic (sm57) and been working on improving my recordings. I still need to purchase a good set of monitors to give myself better judgement. https://soundcloud.com/degroot-2/winter-collab oooh, that sounds very tasty dude. I like the tone, the playing aint too bad either -------------------- You say 'minor pentatonic ' like it's a bad thing |
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Jan 8 2014, 09:57 AM |
I've been working out this solo for a couple days. I loaned out my camera so I'll have to shoot the video later! I'd be curious to know what you think of the guitar tone here? I'm working with a new mic (sm57) and been working on improving my recordings. I still need to purchase a good set of monitors to give myself better judgement. https://soundcloud.com/degroot-2/winter-collab Excellent take man If you are to ask me, the playing can stay like this! Dynamics, melody and technique! About the tone - it has something of the tone you had so far but also a different edge, maybe I am lead by the open string lick you did? I am a fan of those I've been improvising over a small section of this beautiful tune..would like a little feedback from anyone...cheers: need refining!! I made a couple of short Wav files...hope thats right... First try at collab so be honest with criticisms...I can take it!! Winter_collab.wav ( 4.04MB ) Number of downloads: 238 Winter_collab_2.wav ( 4.54MB ) Number of downloads: 325 Howdy mate I like the tone and your articulation is almost there (some notes would require a bit more attention so that they may reach the intended pitch) but the general thing that you need to work on would be direction. The playing needs to head somewhere and that is obtained by working with a clear rhythmic path in combination with the note choice. The licks you used are good, but they are staying instead of leading to a direction. Try to tie them up and we'll take it from there |
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Jan 8 2014, 01:34 PM |
I've been working out this solo for a couple days. I loaned out my camera so I'll have to shoot the video later! I'd be curious to know what you think of the guitar tone here? I'm working with a new mic (sm57) and been working on improving my recordings. I still need to purchase a good set of monitors to give myself better judgement. https://soundcloud.com/degroot-2/winter-collab Nice work Degroot...I'm gonna have a job getting near this standard!! |
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