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post Mar 2 2014, 10:16 PM
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Hey GMC, long time no see smile.gif Here is a raw recording of my orchestral composition. (Just the idea) Its just the intro part but i wanted to share it and get your advices/opinions about it. Hope you like it smile.gif

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Dogukan.

https://soundcloud.com/quadrium1/symphony-in-dm-op-1-excerpt


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post Mar 3 2014, 12:50 AM
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The idea has potential.

OK. I suggest you Take the strings record them on your DAW and Pan the instruments this way:
Cello 25 right
Double Bass 50 right
Violas 25 left
violins 50 right

add some reverb and let us hear it smile.gif

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post Mar 3 2014, 02:26 AM
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Sounds like the beginning of a very nice symphony. I can't wait to hear the rest. It will be great to make it a little more dramatic with the volume, but all I heard was the first three minutes. Are you gonna have a guitar part?
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post Mar 3 2014, 04:38 PM
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Hi Dogukan! This idea sounds very promising. The overall feeling that it creates is a good beginning for a masterpiece, so I will be waiting for the next sections of this tune.

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post Mar 3 2014, 04:48 PM
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Hey Dogukan, long time no see smile.gif You should add percussion and cymbals to make it grand! I think it lingers a bit too much in the same area for these 3 minutes smile.gif It needs to grow - why not listen to your favorite orchestral compositions and see what you can get from there in terms of structure?


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