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Cosmin Lupu
post Mar 28 2014, 06:47 PM
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QUOTE (Darius Wave @ Mar 28 2014, 12:29 PM) *
Wel well. Neil is highly inspired those days biggrin.gif




Now that was nice Ricky! smile.gif I like You sense of melody. Only tip I could give here is Your take lacks a bit of colors. You ae able to create very touching melodies but You could sepnd some more time on polishing them. There are a lot of tools available

1. different vibrato speed and depth
2. Bend and prebens have a few different aproaches - different tempo, different rhythm of bending for example
3. Slides
4. Different picking strength


All those things add colos, important details that are hidden but makes the solo sound pros. If You have andy free time maybe You could add some extra flavour to You take? The melody is very good. It's not about changing notes. It's only about addin much more details to it smile.gif'


In blues it's not the numebr of the notes but the magic of articulation and dynamics which makes it so emotional and full of flavour smile.gif

Anyway well done smile.gif Very nice take smile.gif


Darius is right! And I think that your tone and note choice resemble Santana a lot! Which of course is a good thing biggrin.gif Keep Darius' suggestions in mind and I am sure you can really make this piece shine!

QUOTE (Sensible Jones @ Mar 27 2014, 09:08 PM) *
I wouldn't say I'm enjoying this one any more than the others but I've had a little more time to work on it than usual so, as you say, I've been able to be a bit more methodical. Also, on the others I didn't share my sketch takes to start with so I've enjoyed the feedback that that has brought.
And now I present the Sensible Slow One:-
https://soundcloud.com/neilwaller/gary-moore-sad-final-take
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Hey Neil - I am glad you are finding the time to work on things man smile.gif Now, in the second half, things are a bit too static - alternating the note lengths should make a great difference, so my suggestion is to experiment with that idea and see what you get wink.gif


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post Mar 29 2014, 09:19 AM
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hey guys, this was fun and whipped up something simple, but emotional. i know it's cutting it close to the deadline, but let me know if its is good enough or what not, and i'll tinker with it if need be. cheers
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post Mar 29 2014, 10:03 AM
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QUOTE (Jeroen @ Mar 24 2014, 02:45 PM) *
Ok, I tried something new for the middle part of my Gary Moore Tribute. It´s still not exactly the way I want it. Although the opening lick is going to stay!

https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/gmc-gary-moore-tribute-take3


I'm no instructor but i do like the beginning and end of your take qute a bit. That opening lick is really nice lol, and going back to fewer notes at the end is a good way to finish up. Tinker with the middle a little and your golden.

QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Mar 25 2014, 08:36 PM) *


Some constructive criticism? smile.gif


TURN ON A LIGHT!!!!!! wink.gif Seriously tho your take is very nice. I'm just starting to explore outside/chromatic notes, and your licks are what i want my licks to sound like soon lol.
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Cosmin Lupu
post Mar 29 2014, 04:55 PM
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QUOTE (capasso2 @ Mar 29 2014, 08:19 AM) *
hey guys, this was fun and whipped up something simple, but emotional. i know it's cutting it close to the deadline, but let me know if its is good enough or what not, and i'll tinker with it if need be. cheers


Hey mate! I like the idea very much and the vibrato around 0:26 is very Michael Lee Firkins'ish - I'm a fan biggrin.gif

Towards the end tho, there's a tendency to barely reach the intended pitch so that's what I'd work on wink.gif


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post Mar 29 2014, 05:13 PM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Mar 29 2014, 03:55 PM) *
Hey mate! I like the idea very much and the vibrato around 0:26 is very Michael Lee Firkins'ish - I'm a fan biggrin.gif

Towards the end tho, there's a tendency to barely reach the intended pitch so that's what I'd work on wink.gif


Thanks cosmin. Never heard of this Michael Lee character... going to youtube him up lol. Do you mean at the end of the solo my bends are off pitch, or do you mean consistently at the end of my bends i'm missing the mark?

QUOTE (capasso2 @ Mar 29 2014, 04:06 PM) *
Thanks cosmin. Never heard of this Michael Lee character... going to youtube him up lol. Do you mean at the end of the solo my bends are off pitch, or do you mean consistently at the end of my bends i'm missing the mark?


You all heard it here first lol, Cosmin said i sound like this guy hahaha. I wish.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bIGqcCADE44
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post Mar 29 2014, 08:31 PM
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I worked on it and this is pretty much the way I want it to be smile.gif

https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/gmc-gary-moore-tribute4


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post Mar 29 2014, 10:23 PM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Mar 28 2014, 05:47 PM) *
Hey Neil - I am glad you are finding the time to work on things man smile.gif Now, in the second half, things are a bit too static - alternating the note lengths should make a great difference, so my suggestion is to experiment with that idea and see what you get wink.gif

OK Cos, I'll try changing the 2nd part a little bit and see what happens!!
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post Mar 30 2014, 08:44 PM
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QUOTE (capasso2 @ Mar 29 2014, 04:13 PM) *
Thanks cosmin. Never heard of this Michael Lee character... going to youtube him up lol. Do you mean at the end of the solo my bends are off pitch, or do you mean consistently at the end of my bends i'm missing the mark?



You all heard it here first lol, Cosmin said i sound like this guy hahaha. I wish.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bIGqcCADE44


Some of your bends had that sweet vibrato that MLF has smile.gif He is one of my favorite players, so that you know!

QUOTE (Jeroen @ Mar 29 2014, 07:31 PM) *
I worked on it and this is pretty much the way I want it to be smile.gif

https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/gmc-gary-moore-tribute4


Let me know what you think of it


Hey mate smile.gif I think that it sounds nice, but I would put a little bit more rhythm behind the part around 0:18 - that one is not as definite as it could be smile.gif

QUOTE (Sensible Jones @ Mar 29 2014, 09:23 PM) *
OK Cos, I'll try changing the 2nd part a little bit and see what happens!!
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Cool mate! Stay in good timing and groove and put a whole lotta feeling into it biggrin.gif


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post Mar 30 2014, 10:00 PM
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Ok guys here is my second take. I try to implement a lot of different things in it. Hope you guys like it. biggrin.gif

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/oxnt31ko35xkhch/C_m15FVG-P

https://soundcloud.com/rickynine/garymoorecolabtake2-mp3


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post Mar 31 2014, 02:04 AM
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Here is what I think is my final take and video:



I have also included tabs for the solo in case anyone should be curious.


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post Mar 31 2014, 08:50 AM
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QUOTE (Ricky9 @ Mar 30 2014, 10:00 PM) *
Ok guys here is my second take. I try to implement a lot of different things in it. Hope you guys like it. biggrin.gif

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/oxnt31ko35xkhch/C_m15FVG-P

https://soundcloud.com/rickynine/garymoorecolabtake2-mp3


Nice one Ricky

QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Mar 31 2014, 02:04 AM) *
Here is what I think is my final take and video:



I have also included tabs for the solo in case anyone should be curious.


Hi Capt Cael, I like it a lot, very nice playing. I trust on my ears and it sounds very good smile.gif


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post Mar 31 2014, 01:15 PM
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QUOTE (capasso2 @ Mar 29 2014, 09:19 AM) *
hey guys, this was fun and whipped up something simple, but emotional. i know it's cutting it close to the deadline, but let me know if its is good enough or what not, and i'll tinker with it if need be. cheers



Nice one mate smile.gif Don't be so shy wink.gif You could give a few more dB's of solo volume smile.gif I'll fix this in a final mix smile.gif

QUOTE (Jeroen @ Mar 29 2014, 08:31 PM) *
I worked on it and this is pretty much the way I want it to be smile.gif

https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/gmc-gary-moore-tribute4


Let me know what you think of it



this sounds good - it's consistent and well glued smile.gif Well done smile.gif

QUOTE (Ricky9 @ Mar 30 2014, 10:00 PM) *
Ok guys here is my second take. I try to implement a lot of different things in it. Hope you guys like it. biggrin.gif

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/oxnt31ko35xkhch/C_m15FVG-P

https://soundcloud.com/rickynine/garymoorecolabtake2-mp3



Well Ricky...aside form one bend that is screwed it's a beautiful thing! Awesome work! Love the dynamics and those colors You brought in this take. Really good job!


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QUOTE (Jeroen @ Mar 31 2014, 08:50 AM) *
Nice one Ricky



Hi Capt Cael, I like it a lot, very nice playing. I trust on my ears and it sounds very good smile.gif



Nice man! Some cool dynamics additions here smile.gif I think it can stay as a final take smile.gif You did Your job well smile.gif


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post Mar 31 2014, 03:51 PM
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QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Mar 31 2014, 01:04 AM) *
Here is what I think is my final take and video:

This is great Cael!!
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post Mar 31 2014, 04:06 PM
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QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Mar 31 2014, 01:04 AM) *
Here is what I think is my final take and video:



I have also included tabs for the solo in case anyone should be curious.


Hey mate smile.gif As I said in your thread! Nice touch and interpretation, if this is what you felt, it's clearly good!


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post Mar 31 2014, 04:10 PM
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QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Mar 30 2014, 09:04 PM) *
Here is what I think is my final take and video:



I have also included tabs for the solo in case anyone should be curious.


Very nice take Cael!! And thanks to the instructors for your comments and support.


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Cosmin Lupu
post Mar 31 2014, 04:14 PM
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QUOTE (Ricky9 @ Mar 30 2014, 09:00 PM) *
Ok guys here is my second take. I try to implement a lot of different things in it. Hope you guys like it. biggrin.gif

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/oxnt31ko35xkhch/C_m15FVG-P

https://soundcloud.com/rickynine/garymoorecolabtake2-mp3


Hey Ricky, I like your take! I think that the only thing you should pay a bit more attention to, would be bends such as the one around 0:34 which is a bit under the pitch wink.gif


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post Mar 31 2014, 08:43 PM
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QUOTE (Jeroen @ Mar 31 2014, 08:50 AM) *
Hi Capt Cael, I like it a lot, very nice playing. I trust on my ears and it sounds very good smile.gif


Thanks, Jeroen! smile.gif

QUOTE (Ricky9 @ Mar 31 2014, 04:10 PM) *
Very nice take Cael!! And thanks to the instructors for your comments and support.


Thanks, Ricky. I'm glad you think it's nice smile.gif

QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Mar 31 2014, 04:06 PM) *
Hey mate smile.gif As I said in your thread! Nice touch and interpretation, if this is what you felt, it's clearly good!


Thanks, Cosmin smile.gif I actually double tracked the guitar to see what effect that gave. I've never done that before.


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post Apr 1 2014, 10:33 PM
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QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Mar 31 2014, 07:43 PM) *
Thanks, Cosmin smile.gif I actually double tracked the guitar to see what effect that gave. I've never done that before.


It must've been the laptop speakers as I haven't actually figured that out, but I'll take another listen, because you made me curious biggrin.gif


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QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Mar 30 2014, 10:04 PM) *
Here is what I think is my final take and video:



I have also included tabs for the solo in case anyone should be curious.



Killer solo Cael! I really like it. It has a good balance between melodies and faster licks and the tone fits great! Good job!

QUOTE (Ricky9 @ Mar 30 2014, 06:00 PM) *
Ok guys here is my second take. I try to implement a lot of different things in it. Hope you guys like it. biggrin.gif

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/oxnt31ko35xkhch/C_m15FVG-P

https://soundcloud.com/rickynine/garymoorecolabtake2-mp3



Nice solo mate. I like the feeling of your take which fits great with dynamics and tone used. There are 1 or 2 bends a bit out of pitch but we will do something to improve it in the mix. Thanks!


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