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> Double Stop Soul, Lesson By Javier Aviles
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post Jun 12 2014, 07:04 PM
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Original lesson: Double Stop Soul by Javier Aviles

Hi Guys, Here's my take of this beautiful Soul guitar lesson. Thanks and keep 'm coming Javier! btw, I tune in D Thanks for your comments and suggestions.

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Gabriel Leopardi
post Jun 13 2014, 04:42 AM
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Hi man! good job on this lesson. I think that your playing is very balanced in the whole take. You learnt each part very well and you played it with nice feeling and dynamics. Some of the faster licks could sound even tighter (like the one at 00:43), but the overall great.

Your guitar sounds a bit far in the mix, lit lacks treble or presence compared to the original lesson. I'm not sure if this is a guitar tone or overall mix issue but it would be good if you try to improve the sound of your videos since your playing is very good.

I will grade this take with a 9, congrats!


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Javier Aviles
post Jun 13 2014, 09:36 AM
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QUOTE (SoundShapingDotCom @ Jun 12 2014, 06:04 PM) *
Original lesson: Double Stop Soul by Javier Aviles

Hi Guys,

Here's my take of this beautiful Soul guitar lesson. Thanks and keep 'm coming Javier!

btw, I tune in D

Thanks for your comments and suggestions.



Hello friend. What a pleasant surprise.
First I congratulate you on your music arrangements.
I like that you did as you see it, personally. I like your sound, the neck pickup on your guitar, sounds different. I like your pronounced vibratos and your feeling. I like the way you've solved the sweeping chord FMajor7. I have nothing to correct you, I prefer a version that an imitation.

I add it to "favorite videos" in my youtube channel ...

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Marius Pop
post Jun 13 2014, 02:00 PM
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Now that was sweet, man! Keep them coming! Nothing to add, you did a great job!


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post Jun 13 2014, 10:09 PM
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Hey mate smile.gif

Javier pointed out a great thing here smile.gif This is a very nice rendition with a personal touch, taking the piece elsewhere, in a good place of course!

Congrats on your playing and I do believe that taking Gabi's suggestions into consideration can improve the take even more! I'd be happy to help out with more lessons in this direction if you are interested, so PM me smile.gif

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post Jun 15 2014, 02:51 PM
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Hi mate,

really really good expression here. Nice bluesy touch & sound(but could be a bit louder in the mix in my opinion)..
Just focus a bit more on your timing and that's all. Fantastic!!!


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post Jun 15 2014, 07:40 PM
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Great take over great lesson from Javier smile.gif Nothing to add. Congrats! smile.gif


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post Jun 16 2014, 10:10 AM
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