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> John Frusciante Style Lesson 3, Lesson By Gabriel Leopardi
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post Jun 25 2014, 08:21 AM
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Original lesson: John Frusciante Style Lesson 3 by Gabriel Leopardi





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Gabriel Leopardi
post Jun 25 2014, 03:47 PM
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Hi Bleez, good job with this lesson, you are on the right path with this one but there are still important things to improve regarding feeling and expression. You have to focus on:

(in order or importance)

- Bending: Your bends are not precise, sometimes you don't reach the correct pitch or doesn't sound consistent. Also, there are micro bends at 00:11 and 00:22 that are not sounding.

- Vibrato: Your vibrato technique is a bit weak on this one. Try to do more wrist movement when you play vibrato.

- Timing: This is not something serious but I note some timing issues when you play the octave chords. (around 00:15).


That's all, please work on this details and record a new version of this one.



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Ben Higgins
post Jun 25 2014, 06:45 PM
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Great stuff man. I got no real beef with this.. Gab's observations about the micro bending is most noticeable to me around the 0:22 but that's all I picked up on.

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Guido Bungenstoc...
post Jun 25 2014, 09:46 PM
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Hi,

A good one. But as the others already said you should focus more on precise bending and vibrato. Also try to make your playing a bit more soulful by adding more dynamics to your lines! Right now it sounds a bit lifeless.
Think more like a singer and not just a guitar player and your melodies will come to live, I'm sure. wink.gif


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post Jun 27 2014, 04:50 PM
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