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post Oct 7 2014, 01:22 AM
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hey guys, I've been working on this song for quite a bit now and it's almost complete. I finally got to use my new cabinet for recording as well as get my friend on vocals, Here's a super short clip of it for now untill i'm done with it. I know it's not a lot to judge but i'd love to hear feedback from you all, also it'd be cool for the guys who've seen my old stuff as a comparison to this one. hope it sounds ok and keep on rockin

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5yXINA7Wl2U


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post Oct 7 2014, 07:15 AM
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Sounds promising wink.gif It's a very short demo to make a detailed opinion.

If I compare this with your old stuff, it's a big difference. As example between "Endless" or "A Month After the Storm" and "World Decay" (my favorite from your songs smile.gif ) it's a big difference from the conception idea, tone, relaxing and precision of playing and mixing.
You know in "Endless" I had the feeling that it's a mix from different songs. I mean, somehow my feeling was that at every 16 bars will start a new different part. This change of parts was to regular.
In World Decay it's total opposite. It sound as a very good song and the changed of parts are totally unexpected. I can't guess what it will be next and you have connection between parts. That's why I think this song is the best of yours smile.gif And the mix it's perfect for my taste smile.gif This is my humble opinion judging like a listener wink.gif

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post Oct 7 2014, 08:37 PM
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QUOTE (Monica Gheorghevici @ Oct 7 2014, 06:15 AM) *
Sounds promising wink.gif It's a very short demo to make a detailed opinion.

If I compare this with your old stuff, it's a big difference. As example between "Endless" or "A Month After the Storm" and "World Decay" (my favorite from your songs smile.gif ) it's a big difference from the conception idea, tone, relaxing and precision of playing and mixing.
You know in "Endless" I had the feeling that it's a mix from different songs. I mean, somehow my feeling was that at every 16 bars will start a new different part. This change of parts was to regular.
In World Decay it's total opposite. It sound as a very good song and the changed of parts are totally unexpected. I can't guess what it will be next and you have connection between parts. That's why I think this song is the best of yours smile.gif And the mix it's perfect for my taste smile.gif This is my humble opinion judging like a listener wink.gif


thanks monica smile.gif this song will be some what different than my old ones lol some parts are strange but I wanted to experiment. I'll post the link when i'm done with it. I just have to finish the vocals with my friend today


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post Oct 8 2014, 10:49 PM
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Hi mate! Congrats on this track! This short sample just give me want for more!

I think that the quality of your recording and mix is much better compared with the previous recordings. I notice a big improvement in your guitar sound as well as the drums, which from my point of view could sound even more real. I'm not totally convinced with the snare sound, it's a bit weak, and make me think on a sample instead of a real drum kit. I would try with other sound or at least with more intensity variations and a different EQ.

It's a great idea to create a youtube video that includes lyrics, it makes the sound easier to follow, at least for me that English is not my main language. It's a good addition.

I can say that I'm really anxious to hear the whole thing!


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post Oct 9 2014, 09:03 PM
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Indeed, I agree with Monica and Gabi!

Your writing skills have evolved greatly and I can definitely say this left even me wanting more biggrin.gif I told you I like the instrumental parts but the cookie monster voice is a bit too much for my taste.

Now, that snare could be stronger indeed, but otherwise, let's hear the whole tune, mate! What is this one about and what is the general thematic of your songs?


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post Oct 10 2014, 08:18 AM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Oct 9 2014, 08:03 PM) *
cookie monster voice

Hahaha......I can't stop laughing laugh.gif You are full of imagination biggrin.gif I remembered that you are a MASTER in imitate cartoons voice and somehow I imagined you singing this: tongue.gif


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post Oct 10 2014, 08:29 AM
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Well, who knows biggrin.gif Maybe I might pop it in for a collab, when you guys least expect it tongue.gif


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post Oct 14 2014, 12:02 AM
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thank you Gabe and Cosmin hehe, yeah I've always been terrible at the snares for some reason i can't get the sound from it i need. The cookie monster vocals are deff a taste thing lol, but we all do love cookies! i'll be posting the full song here shortly smile.gif thanks for the feedback


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post Oct 14 2014, 02:10 PM
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Anytme, matey! You have progressed a lot and I am looking forward to see the song ready wink.gif

Now, I am a bit curious - do you sing clean vocals as well, or just extreme style ones? biggrin.gif


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post Oct 14 2014, 07:36 PM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Oct 14 2014, 01:10 PM) *
Anytme, matey! You have progressed a lot and I am looking forward to see the song ready wink.gif

Now, I am a bit curious - do you sing clean vocals as well, or just extreme style ones? biggrin.gif


I deff don't sing either haha, I'm horrible at it man, The vocals here are actually my friend smile.gif the song should be up somewhat soon, i'm waiting for my friend to film my play-through video so that way it's more entertaining to guitar players here to see lol


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post Oct 15 2014, 07:03 AM
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QUOTE (enlo22 @ Oct 14 2014, 06:36 PM) *
I deff don't sing either haha, I'm horrible at it man, The vocals here are actually my friend smile.gif the song should be up somewhat soon, i'm waiting for my friend to film my play-through video so that way it's more entertaining to guitar players here to see lol


Ah, I thought it would've been interesting to hear you sing as well - I am sure you can sing biggrin.gif We all can, but we're generally too afraid to try and too disbelieving in ourselves to budge our arses into learning wink.gif In any case, maybe you guys can make layered screams - low pitch and high pitch - check out this example at 01:15



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