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post Nov 29 2014, 07:58 PM
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QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Nov 29 2014, 06:29 PM) *
Hi Bleez! Unfortunately we can't extend too much this collab since I need to work on mix and edition starting on Monday. We need everything on 5th or maybe 6th in the night. I'll go on vacation the following weekend and I want this collab finished before I go!

aahh no problem dude. Im sure I'll get something sorted out in time smile.gif


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post Nov 30 2014, 09:07 AM
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Welcome Bleez! Huargo - I am definitely looking forward to hearing your take after seeing what you cooked up in the GP file smile.gif


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post Nov 30 2014, 12:35 PM
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QUOTE (kiendop @ Nov 29 2014, 10:49 AM) *
Thanks biggrin.gif, well I did listen a lot to the doors +20 years ago



Thanks Cosmin, now I have some lines I can really practice this thing and work on bends and vibrato smile.gif and break some more strings ohmy.gif. So, of to the shop first.


Hey Janneke! biggrin.gif You broke strings? Which ones and on which guitar? The Les Paul or the Gretsch?


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post Nov 30 2014, 02:16 PM
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QUOTE (bleez @ Nov 29 2014, 04:22 PM) *
I'll give it a go smile.gif

Nice Bleez! i really like your style smile.gif


QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Nov 30 2014, 09:07 AM) *
Welcome Bleez! Huargo - I am definitely looking forward to hearing your take after seeing what you cooked up in the GP file smile.gif


Double tracked.... triying to mask some mistakes.... smile.gif
I need one year more to really nailed it jejeje i think Gabs can't wait much time jejeje.

https://soundcloud.com/david-vico-2/the-dynamite-collab-wip


i'm using the plexitone pedal from carl Martin (the big one)... i've just bought this saturday to a guy who wants more gain in his next pedal. I use the pedal and just the wall of sound 3 plugging for impulses and scfuhamm amps for the delays and reverb. It's and amazing one!!!! very happy!

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post Nov 30 2014, 02:31 PM
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QUOTE (huargo @ Nov 30 2014, 01:16 PM) *
Nice Bleez! i really like your style smile.gif




Double tracked.... triying to mask some mistakes.... smile.gif
I need one year more to really nailed it jejeje i think Gabs can't wait much time jejeje.

https://soundcloud.com/david-vico-2/the-dynamite-collab-wip


i'm using the plexitone pedal from carl Martin (the big one)... i've just bought this saturday to a guy who wants more gain in his next pedal. I use the pedal and just the wall of sound 3 plugging for impulses and scfuhamm amps for the delays and reverb. It's and amazing one!!!! very happy!


Wow dude biggrin.gif Love it! I think you did a great job and the fast runs sound pretty darn clean to me! Great to have you on this one, mate!


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post Nov 30 2014, 03:05 PM
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smile.gif thanks Cosmin...
really helps me write it in the gp5... Some runs wasn't clear before i wrote the lines in the program...Now I have to actually sound like. Another thing I've done was practice at 120 bpm for a week and yesterday it started .... 150 bpm . Today was "easier" for me to play it at 170.
   That happens when students follow your advice lol

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post Nov 30 2014, 06:29 PM
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QUOTE (huargo @ Nov 30 2014, 01:16 PM) *
Nice Bleez! i really like your style smile.gif

thank you kindly smile.gif I wish I had some of your chops though! those fast runs you are playing in this solo are fantastic smile.gif


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post Dec 1 2014, 09:02 AM
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QUOTE (huargo @ Nov 30 2014, 02:05 PM) *
smile.gif thanks Cosmin...
really helps me write it in the gp5... Some runs wasn't clear before i wrote the lines in the program...Now I have to actually sound like. Another thing I've done was practice at 120 bpm for a week and yesterday it started .... 150 bpm . Today was "easier" for me to play it at 170.
   That happens when students follow your advice lol


Hehe!

Mate - I know it helps, as you can actually tweak the notes and see what sort of possibilities you have without too much fuss - it's one way of working, of course smile.gif I find it a bit cumbersome, personally, as I don't have enough patience to type in all those notes tongue.gif But if it works for you.. - hey, you have already proven it!

QUOTE (bleez @ Nov 30 2014, 05:29 PM) *
thank you kindly smile.gif I wish I had some of your chops though! those fast runs you are playing in this solo are fantastic smile.gif


Hey mate - I am very curious to see what you will come up with - as I said many times before, you are on the path of developing a style of your own, which is more important than anything! Let's rock!!

Gents - remember, the deadline for this one is a bit tight, so there's still 4 days left to submit your takes smile.gif Who else is in?


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post Dec 1 2014, 02:31 PM
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Hi guys, I'm in!

this is what I came up with :

https://soundcloud.com/lexman-3/dynamite

I'm still trying to play it better though...
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post Dec 1 2014, 05:26 PM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Nov 28 2014, 08:43 AM) *
Hey Chris - I think the guitar was a bit too loud in respect to the backing - it is an important aspect to keep balanced levels in the mix, as it also helps us in pointing out some timing issues or more doubtful note choices for instance, which otherwise would be harder to spot.

Anyway, the two things which I could put my finger on, would be the vibrato around 0:02 which could and should be wider and more accentuatued and the slight timing issue around 0:14 - of course, playing it more to give it a more polished sound and interpret it more could be a great thing to do wink.gif Let's see the next improved take!


another take with wider vibrato (at least i hope) and less guitar in the mix. biggrin.gif

https://soundcloud.com/motorcitygill/colab3
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post Dec 1 2014, 07:27 PM
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QUOTE (Lexman @ Dec 1 2014, 10:31 AM) *
Hi guys, I'm in!

this is what I came up with :

https://soundcloud.com/lexman-3/dynamite

I'm still trying to play it better though...


Hi Lexman! Thanks a lot for your take! The first phrases are cool, I can hear the call and response very clearly. The last 2 ones are not as cool since I feel that the dialogue is not clear there. About your playing, I note that sometimes your bends don't reach the correct pitch, so you should work on this technique, and also there are some little timing issues around 00:18. Adding more vibrato and dynamics could also improve this one.

QUOTE (Gill @ Dec 1 2014, 01:26 PM) *
another take with wider vibrato (at least i hope) and less guitar in the mix. biggrin.gif

https://soundcloud.com/motorcitygill/colab3



Hi Gill! Thanks for this new take. I can notice that your vibrato is a bit wider now, but for any reason your take has some pitch/tuning issues. This problem can be related to your guitar's tuning but it can also be related to some extra pressure done with your left hand fingers. What about recording a new take having this detail in mind?



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post Dec 1 2014, 09:30 PM
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i will double check my tuning next time. i was a bit on the run when i did this take. wink.gif
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post Dec 2 2014, 10:01 AM
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QUOTE (Lexman @ Dec 1 2014, 01:31 PM) *
Hi guys, I'm in!

this is what I came up with :

https://soundcloud.com/lexman-3/dynamite

I'm still trying to play it better though...


Hey mate smile.gif

I'd focus a bit more on the vibrato, to make it stronger and also, the lick around 0:17 could be better placed in respect to being more in synch with the backing - it gives me a feeling of not being too sure about its direction, so that's what I would take a bit more time to work on smile.gif

Let's see a new improved version, then, deal?

QUOTE (Gill @ Dec 1 2014, 08:30 PM) *
i will double check my tuning next time. i was a bit on the run when i did this take. wink.gif


Hey Gill smile.gif I agree with Gabriel on this one - the vibrato is wider indeed, but you need to check the tuning a bit before recording the second take - also, your timing could have a little more intention behind it.

Trying to stay as best in synch as possible with the backing, will make your take sound deadly tight.

Looking forward to the next one, mate!


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post Dec 2 2014, 05:32 PM
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here is another take cool.gif cool.gif cool.gif

https://soundcloud.com/motorcitygill/colab-4

let me know guys ph34r.gif
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post Dec 3 2014, 04:47 PM
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Hey Gill - I listened to the take and I would suggest that you take a little time to polish the spots which seem a bit undefined - for instance, the lick around 0:03 sounds a bit muddy. If you have the time to polish these aspects, it would be totally awesome, mate smile.gif These ideas could sound totally out there with a little bit more practice - what do you say, do we have a deal? biggrin.gif


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post Dec 3 2014, 05:15 PM
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He everybody,

Here a new take with new strings biggrin.gif

I guess vibrato and bends still need a lot of work.
Think the tone length is a bit better.
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Dec 3 2014, 04:47 PM) *
what do you say, do we have a deal? biggrin.gif


do i have any choice? laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif

ok we have a deal; luckily i already spent a couple of hours in my music room this morning
so the next take is done already, here it is. biggrin.gif cool.gif tongue.gif

https://soundcloud.com/motorcitygill/collab-5

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post Dec 4 2014, 07:27 AM
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Here's my attempt smile.gif




with backing -
[attachment=40053:bleez_full.mp3]
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[attachment=40055:dyno4.mp4]


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post Dec 4 2014, 10:19 AM
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Hehe! Full of energy and straight to the point! Very nice take here, Scott - I see that the old pentatonic is still helping you bring in the coolness biggrin.gif Also, thank you for the files!

QUOTE (Gill @ Dec 3 2014, 05:07 PM) *
do i have any choice? laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif

ok we have a deal; luckily i already spent a couple of hours in my music room this morning
so the next take is done already, here it is. biggrin.gif cool.gif tongue.gif

https://soundcloud.com/motorcitygill/collab-5


Now we are talking - a clear take with nice and wide vibrato smile.gif Thank you for your time and patience, good Sir wink.gif Can you please send me the solo track and the video for your take? smile.gif

QUOTE (kiendop @ Dec 3 2014, 04:15 PM) *
He everybody,

Here a new take with new strings biggrin.gif

I guess vibrato and bends still need a lot of work.
Think the tone length is a bit better.


Hey Janneke! Yes indeed, this take sounds better and if you could work onthe pitches and the vibrato wideness in order to bring in a more livelier take until tomorrow, it would be great! Don't forget to send the video and the solo track as well smile.gif What do you think, do we have a deal?


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post Dec 4 2014, 02:48 PM
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QUOTE (bleez @ Dec 4 2014, 03:27 AM) *
Here's my attempt smile.gif




with backing -
[attachment=40053:bleez_full.mp3]
geetar only
[attachment=40054:bleez_guitar.wav]
mp4 vid
[attachment=40055:dyno4.mp4]



hehehe that's what I call ROCK!!! Your take has a lot of energy and many rocker licks. Thanks a lot for joining! smile.gif


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