The Dynamite Collab, Joint Students/Instructors Video Collab |
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Nov 30 2014, 09:07 AM
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Welcome Bleez! Huargo - I am definitely looking forward to hearing your take after seeing what you cooked up in the GP file
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. So, of to the shop first.|
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Nov 30 2014, 02:16 PM
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QUOTE (bleez @ Nov 29 2014, 04:22 PM)  I'll give it a go Nice Bleez! i really like your style QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Nov 30 2014, 09:07 AM) Welcome Bleez! Huargo - I am definitely looking forward to hearing your take after seeing what you cooked up in the GP file Double tracked.... triying to mask some mistakes.... I need one year more to really nailed it jejeje i think Gabs can't wait much time jejeje. https://soundcloud.com/david-vico-2/the-dynamite-collab-wip i'm using the plexitone pedal from carl Martin (the big one)... i've just bought this saturday to a guy who wants more gain in his next pedal. I use the pedal and just the wall of sound 3 plugging for impulses and scfuhamm amps for the delays and reverb. It's and amazing one!!!! very happy! This post has been edited by huargo: Nov 30 2014, 02:57 PM |
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Nov 30 2014, 02:31 PM
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QUOTE (huargo @ Nov 30 2014, 01:16 PM) Nice Bleez! i really like your style Double tracked.... triying to mask some mistakes.... I need one year more to really nailed it jejeje i think Gabs can't wait much time jejeje. https://soundcloud.com/david-vico-2/the-dynamite-collab-wip i'm using the plexitone pedal from carl Martin (the big one)... i've just bought this saturday to a guy who wants more gain in his next pedal. I use the pedal and just the wall of sound 3 plugging for impulses and scfuhamm amps for the delays and reverb. It's and amazing one!!!! very happy! Wow dude  Love it! I think you did a great job and the fast runs sound pretty darn clean to me! Great to have you on this one, mate! |
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Dec 1 2014, 02:31 PM
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Hi guys, I'm in!
this is what I came up with : https://soundcloud.com/lexman-3/dynamite I'm still trying to play it better though... |
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Dec 1 2014, 05:26 PM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Nov 28 2014, 08:43 AM) Hey Chris - I think the guitar was a bit too loud in respect to the backing - it is an important aspect to keep balanced levels in the mix, as it also helps us in pointing out some timing issues or more doubtful note choices for instance, which otherwise would be harder to spot. Anyway, the two things which I could put my finger on, would be the vibrato around 0:02 which could and should be wider and more accentuatued and the slight timing issue around 0:14 - of course, playing it more to give it a more polished sound and interpret it more could be a great thing to do  Let's see the next improved take!another take with wider vibrato (at least i hope) and less guitar in the mix. https://soundcloud.com/motorcitygill/colab3 |
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Dec 1 2014, 07:27 PM
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QUOTE (Lexman @ Dec 1 2014, 10:31 AM) Hi guys, I'm in! this is what I came up with : https://soundcloud.com/lexman-3/dynamite I'm still trying to play it better though... Hi Lexman! Thanks a lot for your take! The first phrases are cool, I can hear the call and response very clearly. The last 2 ones are not as cool since I feel that the dialogue is not clear there. About your playing, I note that sometimes your bends don't reach the correct pitch, so you should work on this technique, and also there are some little timing issues around 00:18. Adding more vibrato and dynamics could also improve this one. QUOTE (Gill @ Dec 1 2014, 01:26 PM) another take with wider vibrato (at least i hope) and less guitar in the mix. https://soundcloud.com/motorcitygill/colab3 Hi Gill! Thanks for this new take. I can notice that your vibrato is a bit wider now, but for any reason your take has some pitch/tuning issues. This problem can be related to your guitar's tuning but it can also be related to some extra pressure done with your left hand fingers. What about recording a new take having this detail in mind? -------------------- My lessons
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Dec 1 2014, 09:30 PM
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i will double check my tuning next time. i was a bit on the run when i did this take.
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Dec 2 2014, 10:01 AM
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QUOTE (Lexman @ Dec 1 2014, 01:31 PM) Hi guys, I'm in! this is what I came up with : https://soundcloud.com/lexman-3/dynamite I'm still trying to play it better though... Hey mate I'd focus a bit more on the vibrato, to make it stronger and also, the lick around 0:17 could be better placed in respect to being more in synch with the backing - it gives me a feeling of not being too sure about its direction, so that's what I would take a bit more time to work on Let's see a new improved version, then, deal? QUOTE (Gill @ Dec 1 2014, 08:30 PM) i will double check my tuning next time. i was a bit on the run when i did this take. Hey Gill I agree with Gabriel on this one - the vibrato is wider indeed, but you need to check the tuning a bit before recording the second take - also, your timing could have a little more intention behind it.Trying to stay as best in synch as possible with the backing, will make your take sound deadly tight. Looking forward to the next one, mate! |
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Dec 2 2014, 05:32 PM
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Dec 3 2014, 05:15 PM
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He everybody,
Here a new take with new strings I guess vibrato and bends still need a lot of work. Think the tone length is a bit better. |
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Dec 3 2014, 06:07 PM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Dec 3 2014, 04:47 PM) what do you say, do we have a deal? do i have any choice?  ok we have a deal; luckily i already spent a couple of hours in my music room this morning so the next take is done already, here it is.   https://soundcloud.com/motorcitygill/collab-5 |
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Dec 4 2014, 10:19 AM
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Hehe! Full of energy and straight to the point! Very nice take here, Scott - I see that the old pentatonic is still helping you bring in the coolness
Also, thank you for the files!QUOTE (Gill @ Dec 3 2014, 05:07 PM) do i have any choice? ok we have a deal; luckily i already spent a couple of hours in my music room this morning so the next take is done already, here it is. https://soundcloud.com/motorcitygill/collab-5 Now we are talking - a clear take with nice and wide vibrato Thank you for your time and patience, good Sir Can you please send me the solo track and the video for your take? QUOTE (kiendop @ Dec 3 2014, 04:15 PM) He everybody, Here a new take with new strings I guess vibrato and bends still need a lot of work. Think the tone length is a bit better. Hey Janneke! Yes indeed, this take sounds better and if you could work onthe pitches and the vibrato wideness in order to bring in a more livelier take until tomorrow, it would be great! Don't forget to send the video and the solo track as well What do you think, do we have a deal?
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Dec 4 2014, 02:48 PM
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QUOTE (bleez @ Dec 4 2014, 03:27 AM) Here's my attempt with backing - [attachment=40053:bleez_full.mp3] geetar only [attachment=40054:bleez_guitar.wav] mp4 vid [attachment=40055:dyno4.mp4] hehehe that's what I call ROCK!!! Your take has a lot of energy and many rocker licks. Thanks a lot for joining!
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