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post Jan 6 2015, 01:58 PM
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This is another impro solo over a backtrack recorded some months ago.

You Raise me up cover...

https://soundcloud.com/benetom2000/you-raise-me-up-plus-solo
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Kristofer Dahl
post Jan 6 2015, 02:09 PM
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Very nice, did you record the vocals at 01:50 as well? Sounds amazing!

If you would like more specific feedback on your playing please get back to me in your intro thread - I think it's very promising, though there is always room for improvement.


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post Jan 6 2015, 02:19 PM
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Heya Kris....I just recorded solo guitar over backtrack biggrin.gif I played what I felt at that moment, nothing prepared in advance, I just did it biggrin.gif ANd man it was fun ! ANd I need to improve a lot as well wink.gif
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post Jan 6 2015, 02:25 PM
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You were not kidding when you said... "more to come" biggrin.gif
Great combination between guitar and vocals!
I hope you will join with us in our collaborations smile.gif
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post Jan 6 2015, 02:28 PM
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Will do Monica biggrin.gifI hope that my ignorant skills will improve somehow too wink.gif Cya!
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post Jan 6 2015, 03:04 PM
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Exellent! Gary would be proud of Ya! smile.gif A little tip - be carefull with tthe delay level. It can become annoying at some point. It could be a little less of it. Anyway great playing man!


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post Jan 6 2015, 06:00 PM
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Thanks Darius....yes....way too much delay smile.gif Will be less next time...
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post Jan 6 2015, 06:14 PM
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Hi Tom! There is a lot of music on this take! Your phrasing is very musical and has a lot of emotion. There are some little moments where you seem to play some wrong notes (for example at 00:28) but then everything gets clear and epic again. Your tone makes me remind a bit to Kee Marciello and his amazing work on the album Prisioners in Paradise, have you checked it?

One thing that I feel your phrasing is lacking are rests between phrases. As your tone has a lot of sustain and delay it's normal to tend to get the most of if and play long notes, but using some rest could be a good idea to let your phrasing breath a bit. Try it on your next improvisations.


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post Jan 6 2015, 06:58 PM
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Thanks again on good advice Gab! I just played some licks n notes as I felt at that moment...wasn`t preparing at all. ANd yes I still have tons to learn about playing. Grrr...so much will, so little time to play biggrin.gif 3 daughters on me biggrin.gif
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post Jan 7 2015, 11:19 AM
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Hey mate - you have agreat feeling and it's clear to me that you have had fun doing this biggrin.gif Now, I think that in order to build your Gary vocabulary even further, you could always 'borrow' a few things from some GMC Gary oriented lessons, such as:

https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/Gary-Moore-Style-Ballad/
https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/solo-guit...sound-tutorial/
https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/in-the...llad-and-blues/


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post Jan 7 2015, 12:11 PM
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Thanks for link Cosmin ! I just might dig in them biggrin.gif
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